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Where Brooklyn At?... first ever party banger!
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^^^^uppin this for my boy IG...werdage...lol
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It works for me...
Loving the beat first of all, lil intro shit is nice too you know. Hyped up beat without a doubt. Nice adding the other vocals and parts in it you know, adds to the hyped up vibe. You flowing good to the beat, delivery is okay, might have been bit more hyped up but it was nice overall. Lyrics are good, liking your voice, flow was consistent all the way through, couldn't hear anything wrong with it somewhere. Near the end of your verse thing, that shit keeps going on in mind. Real nice mixing as well btw Good shit man |
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nice sampels..if u did that...liking the beat man..grimy typa shit,kinda long intro tho...
lyircs kinda basic but,like u said it is a party track...flow is on point...liking it man http://community.rapverse.com/showt...654#post2514654 RTF PLZ ^^ |
damn quality's WAAAAY better now than on the 1st draft you showed me...whatever you're doing, you gotta lemmie know hahaa...
shit's pretty nyce my negro...keep it up...something a East coast head could feel in da club, definetly...flow on point here, lyrics nyce too kicker, good ish...could've been a bit more hype but it still was nyce :thumbup: |
thanx to all who left feed so far... quality has been my weak point in the past but omma get better with each drop... i been practicing... that's why i don't drop 4-5 times a week.. like to take my time and make sure shyt's straight..
and yeah... simple lyrics... but this is commercial /gangsta /hood shyt... some folks in da hood ain't too bright and don't go for all that complicated shyt...lol and yeah....i did the samples... track is going on my man mixtape back in NY...when he drops his verse... Revolutionary Suicide... Amsterdamn (rap partner) |
uppin this.. my best quality so far
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loved the beat
liked the biggie sample flow is on point nice lyrics cool I already told you about your dubbs...so, yea...check dat and ur str8 dawg 7.8/10 nice track |
alright i liek the samples props on that
like the beat choic hyped up you fit well on this track with ur emotion love your voice flow was o nthrough out cant really point out any flaws roduction is much better from the last track of urs that i peeped so mad props on that |
thanx q and willa... omma holla at y'all in a bit
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i liked the intro.. but it was a little too long.. i was excited for the song.. and i was waiting for the intro to be over.. your flow was cool.. fit the beat real well.. your lyrics were dumbed down.. but like you said. you was goin for that style.. overall this is a pretty tight track..
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aiight pos... yeah... i was going for the whole crowd participation thing, nah mean?... i gets way deeper than this when i want to... just felt like partying when i heard the beat... intro is only like 25-30 seconds...lol... lots of intros are about that long... besides.. this is gon be a full song... not just a SC track...but yeah... thanx 4 da feed
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