Technique vs Kamze
 

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6 - 8 Lines
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Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-05 10:51 AM.

I got to spit 8 lines and got 2 look at Kamze's wack 8 rhymes
When he raps over a beat he's like a singer that mimes
You don't shine your making me want to kill you already
Cuz when I beat you you will be grasping hold of your teddy
I'm way to heavy my lyrics turn ya into shreddies
man you ain't worth nothing not even two pennies
yo my last bar will give ya a scar and hit you hard
Your lost and off ur gaurd cuz ur nothing but a retard

Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-05 11:31 AM.

He's a wack textcee, anythin can knock him straight off he's feet,
And he couldnt accomplish anythin...........so gained a new technique,
This bitch is hopeless, he just can't win, he's a bitch in need,
Cuz wrappin himself in copper, is the only time he's ever in the leed,
Tech you know you're wack, so i know that you're easily harmable
Cuz asking for a second opinion, is the only time you'll be remarkable,
You ain't gona defeat me, so throw all you're stolen lines in the bin,
And putting tape on my mouth........ is the only time he can seal the win,

2nd line - His name use to be accomplish n now its technique.
N i think u'll get the rest.

Yo we upinnnnnn for votes now we'll RTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo upinnnnnnnnn for votez i'll RTF!!!!!!!!!!!! c'mon y'all!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Kamze

Kamze

Ok..your flow was off at points,try shorting your lines.And I didn't like the one personal you had in there...mainly because I used an accomplish line on technique in my battle with him.And your wordplay is good..I like it...it's just..

"only time you blah-blah-blah is when you blah-blah-blah"
OR
"doing blah-blah-blah is only time you blah-blah-blah"

^that seemed to be your style in this battle.And that's just generic.So,try to unleash your punches in a different style...

Your not the worst on this site...so..yea..keep at it.

Technique

Just as I expected.I see your using the "bar-to-bar" transition..just like me:)...so that's good.Your flow was good,I'll give you that.But ur content was not.Like...Your lyrics will turn him into shreddies..?That's just chessy.And wtf@ the teddy line..how old are you?.

Make punches of real things that people would care about...not some gay shit like teddy bears.

Vote-Kamze...for actually throwing some decent punches.


Vote in this battle..
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yea but the 2nd line had the a decent punchline when i said he ain't worth 2 pennies. Don't just vote for the sake of it just cuz you know me and hate me... Upping for some proper votes.

Voted For: Kamze

This bitch is hopeless, he just can't win, he's a bitch in need,
Cuz wrappin himself in copper, is the only time he's ever in the leed,
Tech you know you're wack, so i know that you're easily harmable
Cuz asking for a second opinion, is the only time you'll be remarkable,

VS

...a decent flow but with no proper punchlines,

NO HATE

Kamze be takin the KO here imo.

Voted For: Kamze

In my opinion the battle wasn't that exciting but it was good enough to deserve a winner. I have to say Kamza won his shit just hit harder. Technique shit was 2 degrees hotter than bullshit. Kamze don't get too happy cause ya joint was almost the same but ya "technique" was on point. No disrespect but the battle lacked quality of a good one, so next time take more time in thinking out what you gone spit. Holla if you want me to show you how to do it.

Thanks for the votez upinnnnnnnnnn for more i will RTF!!!!

Yo uppin for votez will RTF c'mon y'all............................................. ...............

yo uppin for mo votes to get this battle closed, i will RTF.

Voted For: Kamze

I vote Kamze

His punches were more creative and consistent...and he had a little more complexity to his verse than Tech... good personals...and good creativity

Tech: your verse was iight but it was a lil too basic...your punches didnt hit hard...you could of had some personals...try using alternate vocab for the words everyone is expecting and give us something we aint think u waz gon' say..like i could read your first line and then i would know what your second line already was.....just fix a couple things and u will be straight...

Kamze return the vote me vs. capz

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...588910&posted=1