Children Cry (with Phase.One)
 

okay typing as I listen.........you def overdubbed the opening comes in too loud....u really need to chnage up ya flow...u come wit same flow every track.....lyrics is kinda preachy....decent but common for this subject...very common.....delivery was upped hyper than u usually do..next dude......got a decent delivery but lyrically very weak......flow is koo nothing spectacular..too many addlibs..they kinda outta place on a track like this.....nothing impressive about dude.....jus decent.......beat is good an really carries song IMO.......got a nice sample on hook......overall I was expecting more but not bad

Nice beat...loving this beat actually...and the sample on the hook is great

L. Veracity: solid shit as usual. Flow is on point, it may be the same on every track like Triple said but I like your flow so it doesn't bother me in fact. The lyrics are good, speaking on things many can relate to. Emotion is there and your delivery was on point as well.

Phase.One: I don't really like his voice, don't know why...but his flow is okay, on point as well so nothing bad about that. Lyrics are okay, they're not as good as yours though. Delivery is good though...cool stuff...

Overall solid track imo (feedback to learn rankings in RG btw)

beat is reflective


I don't like the dubbing of the entire verse though..I sawy dub phrases or rhyming words


and vocals could be amped


I liked the hook

the phase 1 guy is pretty decent...flow is there...his delivery is good, but predictable almost

how about some surprises



solid drop 7/10