Mimesis vs +Stealth+
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-01-05 at 03:49 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

+Stealth+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 05:51 PM.

Just Keep Writing Ya Frees At Least They Get There Usual-Glares//
But Beating-Me.......................Is Like Def Kids Winning Musical Chairs//
Stealth Turns ya "DREAMS" Into "Nitemares" So Fear-Ya-Mattress//
Or Imma Have You "FACE-DEATH".....Like MIRRORS-IN-CASKETS!!!//(Damn)
Go Head Faggot, Use your Old Unattractive-Style...
.....................I Feel Bad I Have To Murk A HYPERACTIVE-CHILD!!!//(its true)
This Dis-Owned Ya Flo But Dont Go Stay Longer To Recieve-The-Damage//
You Might Think Your Skill Is The Best Here....But Ever1 Else Believes-Its-Average//
My "Keys" Is Savage Like Cavemen When Im Textin'....Let Me Ask Ya A Question//
How You Think Ya The Best-When Your Lines Are More STRETCHED Than FAT JOES INTESTINES?!!!//

finish this:

"Light U Up" Like A "Blunt"...I'll "Stunt On This Runt"..."Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence//
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail"..Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"//(WOW!)

ITS DAT SERIOUS

R.I.P.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 06:38 PM.

I'll post my verse when I get home from school. Word.

Kid, you're fucking garbage.

Seriously.. everything around is you trash.. don't you see this?
That's why we say Stealth it when we don't want to read shit
You'll feel this when my fists hit your face, you're a mess herb
I'll just follow your name and add a fucking loss to your record
I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03
Ayo... I don't need colors to say you shouldn't be rappin dude
I'm leave ya redefined, Teal.. when I leave you black and blue
And looking at your sig.. I can just tell I'ma be rippin this lame
It really ain't that serious.......it's just another win to my name

Peace.

Voted For: +Stealth+

Seriously.. everything around is you trash.. don't you see this?
That's why we say Stealth it when we don't want to read shit
2/10..weak opener,poor attempt at nameplay.
You'll feel this when my fists hit your face, you're a mess herb
I'll just follow your name and add a fucking loss to your record
3/10..1st line was direct filler and punch wuz boring
I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03
6/10..good punch
Ayo... I don't need colors to say you shouldn't be rappin dude
I'm leave ya redefined, Teal.. when I leave you black and blue
2/10...nope,this didn't work..kinda stupid
And looking at your sig.. I can just tell I'ma be rippin this lame
It really ain't that serious.......it's just another win to my name
0/10.....this was..................not a punch -_-

13/50(26%)
Mimesis...wtf verse was this?Has to be the worst I've seen from you in a whole.Ur punches didn't connect..esspeccially the attempted nameplays.You had direct filler in ya verse,in the 2nd bar.And your rhyme scheme was lacking.PLus...your last bar wasn't even a punch.

Just Keep Writing Ya Frees At Least They Get There Usual-Glares//
But Beating-Me.......................Is Like Def Kids Winning Musical Chairs//
3/10..punch is played
Stealth Turns ya "DREAMS" Into "Nitemares" So Fear-Ya-Mattress//
Or Imma Have You "FACE-DEATH".....Like MIRRORS-IN-CASKETS!!!//(Damn)
5/10..liked the 1st line more as mirror lines are played,ur rhyming was dope tho
Go Head Faggot, Use your Old Unattractive-Style...
.....................I Feel Bad I Have To Murk A HYPERACTIVE-CHILD!!!//(its true)
3/10..not feelin this..
This Dis-Owned Ya Flo But Dont Go Stay Longer To Recieve-The-Damage//
You Might Think Your Skill Is The Best Here....But Ever1 Else Believes-Its-Average//
4/10..ok,but a lot of people do consider him above average
My "Keys" Is Savage Like Cavemen When Im Textin'....Let Me Ask Ya A Question//
How You Think Ya The Best-When Your Lines Are More STRETCHED Than FAT JOES INTESTINES?!!!//
5/10...good.
"Light U Up" Like A "Blunt"...I'll "Stunt On This Runt"..."Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence//
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail"..Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"//(WOW!)
6/10...nice closer..

26/60(32%)
Ok,you had played lines..like the musical chairs and mirror ones.The hyper active one was kinda dumb.The fat Joe bar was decent..and your closer was nice.Best thing in your whole verse was your rhyme scheme really..

So...my HONEST opinion...

Vote-Stealth...

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

mimesis you abuser lol.............................

LMFAO. Can anybody say dr?

He had 0 punches, 0 personals.. but yet I lost? Fuck out of here and never vote on any of my battles again.

Generic wordplay = 5/10.. personal = 0/10.

Lmao. Natural Killa, you're a clown, man.

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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

this was a weak battle....mimesis u came with sum bullshit for this battle, u can do way better....

....but you won this.....BARELY!!!

STFU mimesis ya shit was wack u aiont even know how to do punchlines! every line was basically a hard punch! yall dont even know how 2 rhyme (most of you) from what ive seen the only real good mcs are marvjay, UNF and mr multie! and im new so his vote counts how can it be dr when no1 knows me smfh dumbass!

Lmfao @ your view of real emcees.

I've ko'ed UNF, and owned Marvjay 3 times, twice with knockouts!!

Mimesis won here, but if he tried he would have royally whored you.

stfu b4 u get owned
ill battle you,