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RV's 1st father-son collab, werd
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=208261
me n ThatN*gga, i had that neva scared shit frum b4, but i got him on it. n werd, im hiz dad, he my son, u know http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210088 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210219 werd |
werd pops lol..................leave some feed yall
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Kool B:
Flow...was jerky and choppy at the end rhymes...I know what u were tryna do, but had you switched it up and continued the lines on a few bars, it would have been pulled off better Presence is good on track That Nigga: flow is actually pretty good...fell off in 3-4 spots...work on bein more consistent throughout the track not great..not bad fellas = decent 1 |
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lol, yeah mayn, there wuz this 1 part, i kinda fucked up a lil, like i dunno, wen i sed tha werd it didnt come out right, but i liked all tha rest so i sed fuck it n left it, u know, werd |
drop some feed nuccas
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lmao at father son collab, i wuz expectin some bridgin the gap shit n i get this haha
listenin... bone crusher beat n hook is hot transition from hook 2 verse sux, u need to come wit some loud in ya face crunk shit if u gon use this beat n hook hook again, sounds like a completely different song 2nd verse same problem, but this fits better than the 1st verse song's not bad, 6-7/10 i'd say lol the hook comes in again, i thot this wuz over ok, now its over, still a 6-7/10 |
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