Legend vs Mike Macs
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
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Check in by: 11-02-05 at 08:43 PM

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Mike Macs has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 08:16 PM.

Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 08:19 PM.

you practice sucking dick like girls do wit lolli pops
its like a advertisment seeing mike macs on 2 notch
mike macs half decent girls this nigga wish to attract
so mike spends time a mickie D's working on big macs
he sees how long in jail he can keep his butt tight
like the candy everyone wants to see what mikes likes
so pay ya toll and try to watch da votes on da poll
cause one knock to ya face eyes fall out ya asshole


explanation:
where i live all the whores work on a street called 2 notch dead serious and the other ones if you dont get dont vote
and today i saw girls sucking on lolli pops in class and they were doing it for real cause i know these girls and they suck dick alot.trust me.

Look at this dick ridin bitch, he thinkin he a legend
Ain't no hope for you fake bitch mc's, not even heaven
This bitch ain't ready for war, but he wanna step up and battle
I'ma shake the shit outta this nigga like he a baby rattle,
This nigga gonna get knocked off his saddle, like Christopher Reeves
Check this bitch is just vegetarian happy lovin pussy,
He don't want beef, it's on his list of food peeves
Check this niggas battle record, 1-4 he got no history,
He got mo losses than world war II, it ain't no mystery

I ran outta time fo ideas fo punch lines, cus I was almost outta time and takin to long, so ya it was pretty shitty.

Fuck my fault for tripple post but since he explained I'll explain....

Baby Rattle-When I said that, I meant like it'll shock the fuck outta him when he see's it, shakin him
Peeves-Things you don't like, so when he makes a list, beef is one of em
War world II-Like his losses added up mo than the deaths of people from world war II

funny in a good way uppin.....................................

uppin on this ya heard me....................................

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This was feedback posted for Legend
 

legend took this one easily i rekon, this is one of your best battles so far man, you reppin gods of war big time yo

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Voted For: Mike Macs

Legend

Ok,I felt your shit was weak.Like,you were talking about some wack shit throughout your verse.Saying he practice sucking dick like a lolli pop is just herbish.That's sounds like something a little kid would write.Try to aviod explaining your verses in the future too.

Mike Macs

Ok,felt your punches were less "newbish" than legend's.You actually had decent similies and personals...something that was missing from Legend.Your best line was the World WarII line.You still had a few played lines,like the Reeves one and the vegetarian/beef line.But,you still win.

Vote-Mike Macs

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This was feedback posted for Mike Macs
 

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