Deeper then plans..
 

Track me and my boys did .....

check it "deeper then plans"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...fm?bandID=82331



i replyd to malace and kryptic

sup listening: intro aight lil piano interlude...kicked into it nice...flows good quality is ok nice track lyrically nice...keep droppin...you quite good :thumbup:

notice you got a lisp..

Lmao...funny intro...made me chuckle...

Hook is nice, I'm feeling it...dude has nice voice...

Cho-Kahn: nice voice, your flow was on point throughout entire verse, quality can be upped though. Lyrics are good, you got catchy style I like it, delivery might have been bit better but nothing too bad actually

Hook...catchy as well

Angelz...his voice kinda annoys me, flow is decent throughout his verse, i'm missing some fire in this though...he does remind me of that dude from Cypress Hill, delivery was okay as were the lyrics

CryptO: I like his voice and presence the most in fact but I can't quite put my finger on the reason why I find this. It's just overall vibe he sending out I suppose, good lyrics, coo delivery, good flow...

Solid track y'all, I'd bump this!

Please RTF on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213612

Thank you

the beat was hot... opera like...

the nigga on the hook sounds Limited Edition....lol... it was hot...

the flow was on point.... deeper plans ... both yall niggas came wit some deep lyrics on this...

good production, quality was half bad

thx a lot ppls...we deff did our thing w this !

i will RTF ASAP

1nE

Listening..Tha first guy sounds abit like fifty cent..I mean tha guy with double - Ok..First verse flow is nice man..Good lyrics but you sluring abit on some of tha vocals..Tha beat is nice - But abit repetetive..Overall: 7/10 Please RTF..

i don't know about soundin like 50 cent but...ok

thx man 1nE

listnin...
intro's funny lol
beats hot
verse comes in
flow is ok, lyrics are good, quality isnt
likin the hook, n how the beat changes on it
2nd verse- good lyrics again, only problem is the qualiry
3rd verse- sounds like the hook is jus continuin into a verse, but i like how that sounds... delivery/flow is best here, quality sounds better
hot song , 8/10
n no, u dont sound at all like 50
intro n outro sound like they cud be from a 50 song tho

thx ppl and i will RTF in a few mins here