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Idea 11-04-05 06:39 PM

Idea: *Starlight* Please Check..
 
Please feedback on this..Thanks..

http://idea.dmusic.com/music/stream...302f/stream.m3u

And yea..Im UK..

LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2524193

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213367

Willa 11-04-05 09:11 PM

whoa not feeling ur intro voice you sound umm young need to get soem bass added to ur vocals
beat idk its really basic not feeling it to be honest too fast for you i think
flow ok not great though you could use improvement here
lyrics pretty basic nothing stood out to be honest with you
presence/emotion actually pretty good here you have a really bad lisp though lol liek one of the worst ive ever heard i think idk some type of speech impediment
overall ok track its hard to understand soemof ur words cause of ir lisp lol but flow was pretty straight and ur presence was there
for stats

"Doc" Trin 11-04-05 09:13 PM

wow ur voice is deftgdtyhfgjufyujftyufyu...... the quality was good.. and ur flow reminds me of what i do on the toilet... and its not rap...... good try though. And ur chorus reminds me of what i do on the toilet to.... and its not make choruses....

Idea 11-05-05 06:19 AM

^Thanks Will Appear..

And "Doc Train" - Your presence here makes me wonder - Why your mother didn't abort you before your immature brain took control of you..smh..Up for real feedback...Not no "deftgdtyhfgjufyujftyufyu"..ffs

Willa 11-05-05 12:59 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...age=3&pp=15will you just leave some feed on teams 4 track for me you dont nee to vote id jsut like some feed
u want to collab someimte?

Idea 11-05-05 01:40 PM

Its locked..How shall i send ya tha feed?..

UPPPPPP THISSSSSSSS TRACKKKKK..

ksr 11-06-05 11:59 AM

link don't work

Idea 11-06-05 12:23 PM

Ahh damn sorry..Try going to

http://idea.dmusic.com

and choose it from there..Thanks..Tell me if you run into anymore probs..


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