I Want You Back (Feat Marvin Gaye)
 

Listening:

Dope beat i love mavin gaye.......flow is always on point with you.......lyrics very nice not to hard which is good........luving the mavin gaye bits.....delivery is sweet ooo sorry i mean dope lol!!!!

8/10

beat is dope

vocals a tad loud-ish

flow is pretty good...but cud be smoother on beat...u were on beat, but u didn't own this beat

not bad


lyrics are good


solid track dawg


1

Like The Beat.....

You Coming On..Lil Loud....Good Lyrics So Far

Flows Good


Emotion Could Be upped A Lil

Dope Delivery I like How You Come On Sound Real Confident

Overall This Track Is 8.5/10

Think Emotion Cud Be upped

listnenin...
like the beat, nothin amazin
rappin starts, bit loud... ur obviously tryin to put a lot of emotion in this but its not really workin
sample comes in, bit 2 quiet but still koo
2nd verse... still 2 loud, basically everythin i sed bout the 1st verse, good lyrics tho
hook sample again, fits good wit the beat, but not wit the verses
3rd verse... same as ur other 2, this wud be really hot if u'd put some emotion into it
again (u did this wit ur put ur hands up song 2) the end is too abrupt, u need to let the beat fade out for a few secs

listening: beat is ill, beat starts off to slowly, not your best track seriously i dunno, flow is dope, quality is getting better and better, nice lyrics seriously, overall dope track man keep em coming,

ps: do a mixtape or a demo man, i could produce for you if you want to , and for free:)

^Emotion is actually jus right for tha track cause if you listen i keep it mellow except on some words im sayin to show anger etc...as far as tha beat endin word it ends to short iunno why it was like that an tha samples were already on beat so i cant help it if they was low..=1=

Upp............

I'ma peep this when I get home. In return you owe me head. pc

yeah, vocals are too loud.
not enough emotion, flow was on point.
I dont really dig love songs that much.
you need more emotion, its spoilin the track completely
the 2nd verse is a step down flow wise from the 1st verse.

overall, its an aiigh, track
just decrease your vocals, and add emotion, it prolly would've been fire.

word
this a pretty decent track
the first thing i noticed is that the delivery is kinda weird
i think if anything, it should be a bit more layed back on this kinda track
you seem like you shoutin a lil too much for this kinda a track..
at least for the first verse

im loving the lyrics, they real str8
the flow is on point, i think i only found like one spot you sort of fell off
emotion wise you coo, jus work on delivery a bit and this would be real solid
but keep the whole angry thing in the 3rd verse, since the lyrics match the delivery there...
so word, overall it was pretty solid...

MAS ON EM!

ehhh... track is aiight.... vocals way too loud... beat was nice but teh samples were kinda low... let MG be heard since ya paying tribute to the man by featuring him on ya track, nah mean?... presence was decent but emotion seemed forced... i was expecting more from how you were promoting it... kinda disappointed me like Nas's first album... it was good but i thought it would be better... one

Apreciate tha feed..tizz i tried diff delivery on this not my norm...as for samples bein low i cant help it it was how tha beat was vocals were to loud but what you expect from my 10 $ headset mic....upp

$10 head set mic have nothing to do with it. lol
just decrease your volume.

^i didnt say it did i jus said my vocals loud cause mah mic....