"Something For Your Radio"-UNF
 

Proly Ma Best Meh.....

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the beat is straight
"UNF"
Sound like a young ass white kid
wow, your UK accent is almost non existant, that alone is dope as fuck.

anyway, the chorus.
its straight, maybe you should've rehearsed it a few more times before recordin it

1st verse
I dont know what to say. you rap JUST different, I cant put my finger on it what I dont like about it. its not GARBAGE, but Its somethin about it that I dont feel. lol

2nd verse
I like alot better than the 2nd verse
maybe what you need is better DELIVERY and variation in your damn voice. more emphasis on certain words? more confidence on the mic? I dont know.

overall its an aiigh track
the more you do, the better you will get, I can see you gettin better with more practice.
this feedback is for the RG.
Return the favor on my track
diamond in the rough

the beat is alright....

you sound mad young like you about 12-13 or somthing....the hook is already you had pressene and flow but somthing about it dont sound right....but you practicing mad so you problay gonna get better as you get more polished i can tell u some what new too it.....you aint too bad playa.....

overall - 7/10

beat is ill, verse is iight, hook is kinda wack no hate, just not liking it, if you need a dope hook, holla at me you know my msn :gangsta: flow is cool, beat is really dope , quality hurts my ears lol, send me the beat please when you get on msn man, 2nd verse is better, songs finish's really badly lol, overall this is your best track, not the best one on rapverse but one day ull make one success im sure
peace

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...664#post2530664

i can understand you very wel... and ur vocals are way to high.... the flow goes off and the chorus is mad basic... and the beat sounds like it was made from a 15 dollar casio piano....

5.5./10