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GKillaz05 11-08-05 09:40 AM

GKillaz05 vs Blackmage
 
Battle Rules:

12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Goodluck :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-13-05 at 09:40 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 11-08-05 01:35 PM

GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-05 01:35 PM.

GKillaz05 11-08-05 01:35 PM

Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill...
Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still...
I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit...
Rebuilding from the ground up but you stay grounded...
Blacks on my next stop to get played like an X-Box...
Tried joinin a crew but hes hard to pick like a lock...
Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument...
Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent...
Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked...
Name is a title cuz punches get read like a book did...
Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script...
Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it...
Kids skills slippin' like we were rappin' in a 'arena'...
Mage's career is fake, like he's the black John Cena...
I got him sapinaed to court because he "murdered rap"...
No hard punches and weak flow I know you heard of that...

System 11-10-05 12:18 AM

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 12:18 AM.

Blackmage 11-10-05 02:10 PM

You Herb, would someone make my bud wiser..? sry i asked em
His Core's light, Gkilla? Right you're the son of sam....adams
I'm notorious for handlin my B.I.,G Killa's hatin
all you killin's my expectations and your reputation
speculation? Nah 47 wins. are we talkin? No!
cause besides my name in your sig you have nothing to show
and about you there's even less to know, you're due to die
your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide
who am I? ask around bout my legacy if yoyu doubtful
you got as much of a chance as your crew vs. the council
I'll help you, punch my self wit my mad reacher
I'm comin out of the closet....
....but wouldn't that make you the fag preacher?
You ain't LL to be A legend most have to die I guess then
you're on your period, funny i beat you with 6 questions
here's your lesson, my verse, but you must be killin it again
cause everytime you battle someone they're born again
.................................................. ................with a win

Done
Bud=herb Budweiser/coor's light/samuel adams=beer
you don't get it, pm me or don't vote

Good Luck dog

GKillaz05 11-10-05 02:15 PM

good spit man, went over the line limit tho, so I will have to DQ you.. lol, jokes..

UPPIN for Votes....

Blackmage 11-10-05 02:18 PM

thanks and nah that's a compact line bro i'm pretty sure it count as one
but nah really respect man good luck and good drop. peace

phive 11-11-05 09:18 PM

Voted For: Blackmage

nice job man your multies, flow and rhyming skills where 10 times betta than this biting piece of shit, g killaz werk on ya skills your verses are too short and not sweet enough

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Blackmage 11-14-05 09:37 AM

uppin............................................. .....

Blackmage 11-15-05 12:53 AM

up this shit nah mean...................................

Blackmage 11-16-05 03:51 PM

Can we get some votes on this battle please......uppin

veyetal 11-16-05 04:37 PM

Voted For: Blackmage

You Herb, would someone make my bud wiser..? sry i asked em
His Core's light, Gkilla? Right you're the son of sam....adams
>okay, wording is a lil off, but decent
I'm notorious for handlin my B.I.,G Killa's hatin
all you killin's my expectations and your reputation
>too basic
speculation? Nah 47 wins. are we talkin? No!
cause besides my name in your sig you have nothing to show
>again, basic
and about you there's even less to know, you're due to die
your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide
>decent
who am I? ask around bout my legacy if yoyu doubtful
you got as much of a chance as your crew vs. the council
>meh
I'll help you, punch my self wit my mad reacher
I'm comin out of the closet....
....but wouldn't that make you the fag preacher?
>meh
You ain't LL to be A legend most have to die I guess then
you're on your period, funny i beat you with 6 questions
>meh
here's your lesson, my verse, but you must be killin it again
cause everytime you battle someone they're born again
.................................................. ................with a win
>aight

decent verse, nothing really spectacular, probly sound pretty decent audio, just nothing too special, basic mostly, but still decent, word


Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill...
Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still...
>boring
I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit...
Rebuilding from the ground up but you stay grounded...
>nothing
Blacks on my next stop to get played like an X-Box...
Tried joinin a crew but hes hard to pick like a lock...
>basic
Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument...
Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent...
>basic, and it just sounds gay
Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked...
Name is a title cuz punches get read like a book did...
>yes, punches are read
Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script...
Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it...
>okay?
Kids skills slippin' like we were rappin' in a 'arena'...
Mage's career is fake, like he's the black John Cena...
>stupid
I got him sapinaed to court because he "murdered rap"...
No hard punches and weak flow I know you heard of that...
>yes, i heard of it, and actually read it in your verse

waaaay too basic, and not creative at all...both need to try harder, but v/black mage for consistency in punches, and having a couple effective ones, word

Blackmage 11-22-05 11:20 AM

Uppin to take this one home with me... so yea umm..uppin, to the stars

Blackmage 11-24-05 01:58 AM

uppin past the stars...lookin for jesus to drop a vote too

Blackmage 12-02-05 01:17 AM

uppin.............................................


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