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Devin 11-08-05 08:18 PM

Bad Luck
 
My First Link
My Second Link

Intro:
Hello ladies and gentle men and welcome to my life

Hook = Sung
This is the true real life
Of a boy that had to pay the price
of a bad role of dice
that almost took his life
and keeps him cold at night

it was thirteen years ago,i dont remeber and im gratefull
God decided and told me devin im not goin to take you
i wanna see how you will addapt to living i new life
you will work your way up to the top n' reach new hights
I was in the house alone when i happened to find a lighter
i was curouis what will happen if i started a fire
So i touched the flame to the carpet...my worse mistake
flames were every...all i wanted to do is get away
Doors locked, i turn around and hit my head on a pole
In the hospital were the only thing not dead was my soul
Every day i live with the thought what if it didnt happenen
Then they wouldnt fuckin be talkin shit and laughin
The only escape is my date with my girl named rappin
Some how i know theres a destiny out there for me
Im just not yet aware of what god wants me to be
He hasnt opened the doors yet or gave me the test
when its time ill be in the desk next to the steps

They say i have the best bad luck every day
i seem to do the worst things in the best way

Devin 11-09-05 04:13 PM

Uppin... This... Ish...

Devin 11-09-05 08:52 PM

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Elegiac 11-09-05 10:13 PM

Good flow, storyline is good. True too, maybe could have been a little more descriptive and used more complex imagery. But good short lil drop.

Devin 11-11-05 02:59 PM

Thanks For Feed Max Uppin For Some More

Devin 11-12-05 10:43 AM

Shit Open Mic Is Becoming Inactive And Dead

Or All Yall Are Just Tired And Sleepin The Fuck Out My Shit


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