~stylez~ vs - Menace -
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~stylez~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:15 PM.
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- Menace - has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:17 PM.
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ima drop the same shit i did last time man...................
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Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts. service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me... ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss, - Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin' Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss, your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!! im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time..... u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes. i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT. Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES, drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath. Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved. this was honestly rushed..........hahahaha MENACE you have the advantage cuz you saw my verse....... |
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...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START ...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES ...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!! ...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”… ...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘[b]DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS I had Fun |
aight homes this was a good battle............people have to vote on this.............
if your GON DR people then get out..............cuz ill have your VOTE DQ'D........... now uppin this HOT BATTLE! nice drop homes. |
uppin this shit c'mon...................................
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Voted For: - Menace -
This was a pretty cool battle but menace took this one easily ~STYLEZ~ Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts. Naw weak opener service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me... ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee Nope so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss, - Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is Nope Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift Wtf? Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin' Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions Okay? he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss, your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!! Decent im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time..... u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes. i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT. Okay Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES, drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath. Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved Decent couple barz, and closer Overall this verse could have been alot better..not very hard hitten punchlines , and not very hard hitten personals elevate. -Menace- ...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START Woo..nice opener ...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES Ha nice punchline ...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!! Damn[/n] ...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”… [b]hAHA NICE ...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS [b]Decent closer Overall pretty easy battle to vote winner: -Menace- |
Voted For: - Menace -
no JOKE CLOSE BATTLE....real nice battle..i can't vote...aight i will though stylez-verse was fiya...had some nice punches and personals in there...flow was there too....had me gone wit a couple of those lines....Gone=laughin....but it seemed like you feel off a lil bit at the end wit the monica lewinsky line...but you had that shit line to cover up a lil bit for that....but nice verse overall 8/10 Menace-every single one of your bars hit...didn't really see that many personals but you punches are what grabbed my attention...i see that you put a lil bit of thought in your lines and it made em real nice...dracula line i shit myself and that lightnin line i almost gave up on readn the other guys verse...and all those other punches are nice too....so nice verse 9.7/10 |
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Voted For: ~stylez~
I Voted 4 ~stylez~ ~stylez~ Best Lines: Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts. service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me... ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee Gotti Nuffguns BEst Lines: Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES Overall: stylez had better flow and stucture, rushed and all Yo! VOTE on MY 1st BATTLE: Poetics vs Technique http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=214046 |
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