Sex At Wal-MarK
 

Sex At Wal-MarK

Oh GLAD between my thighs action boys get satisfaction a lots
Fatal attraction to my hot pies so I hear plot and lies non-stop
So like Michael Douglas one weekend can freak mean get hot
They have plans ill like landfills that try and contaminate my mind
Their love words collide and serve as guides to find
Ways to sex, I have days complex just dodging cock
Why my round brown butt is like a bazaar star leading a flock
Wise men to recognize trends at Bethlehem so boys wanna trap it
One guy say my body like a highway that lead male traffic
Down town just to clown around and hound my thing graphic
Conditions are plenty certain catch friction for mini-skirting and
The sex tradition is alerting, boys come to home close the curtains with plan
In mind I stand divine and naked he try take it so coo-chee is in demand
Grooving on carpet being a moving target cock gets to be a rocket
Launched my way shaped like pistols and missiles and turning sprockets
It all start in Wal-marK a boy with a tall heart want some bad oh he jest
Wanna get my tongue and stuff my dress new and my breast too hot less
Filling as mess spilling in my bra so my nips drips milk in silk oh GLAD
His a thug stalks love talk be fire making desire taking me to bed in clad
At walmarK waiting on customer service talking to a buster nervous

had vocab imagetry and multies out the ass but cats on this site hate and don't care to elevate to this level

imagery..non...multis..sucked...vocab....you had it...because even the word IT is vocab...but your vocab was elementary..why is it you honestly think your the only that thinks your dope? why would we give props to other people..but not you?
catch a fucking clue guy...you suck dick..you need to elevate 10 fold...

look In-Vision I have to be dope I dissed the fuck out of so called geniuses like you and you wimp out man yall should elevate

you have to be dope? Because you wrote a diss to me? lol...anyone can write a diss..it doesn't make them dope...or there diss dope....your diss..had absolutely nothing to do with me...i could have used it..taken it the name "in-vision" and used it against anyone..because it was irrelevant to me...i didn't wimp out..i refused to write anything in return...because you have not yet understood the concept of battling....in other words..what you wrote..for the last time..was fucking whack

Vocab means nothing.If big words make you dope,then why not just read the dictionary AAALLL day long instead of working on your flow and shit,right?

Natural killa good point IN-VISION is a overrated idiot scared to respond to my diss it made him look like shit for real yo

Vocab means nothing.If big words make you dope,then why not just read the dictionary AAALLL day long instead of working on your flow and shit,right?
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don't ever fuckin try and disagree with me..either do it..or don't...

i never said it meant anything....HE SAID HE HAD VOCAB...I SAID IT SUCKED...i didn't say his piece sucked because of it...my point was....don't bring that up...if it was shitty anyways...i agree with you..vocab isn't important..but fucking read whats going on..he brought it up...not me...all i did was point out that it was shitty

by the way....not only do I agree with how much vocab is a very non-important element..i'll give you a prime example of it....

atticus..uses big words all the time..a lot of the times they don't even make sense...but people are too lazy to read a dictionary...and so there justy like...
"damn thats so dope"

hence...atticus = most over rated topical cat in hip hop history

Weird topic n all...Vocab really wasnt there...Structure was decent...n all...And really didnt have a flow...overall- 1/10....Elevate big time manye...

Wicked One not true yopur level is not this high stop jumping on the bandwagon you can't and probably will never multi-rhyme who you fooling? hell eat some caNDY OR SOMETHING

You Are Fucking Trash...

schema AMAZING i WRITE BEING SERIOUS AND GET NO RESPONSES BUT THIS ONE i THIRTEEN ALREADY SO HERE'S THE TRUT THIS DANG PIECE RIGHT HERE IS OFF THE FUCKING HOOK YALL

so youre writing shitty pieces on purpose to get feedback...

interesting strategy...

sorry man, first off you need to learn how to make sense and vocabulary can only help for better rhyme schemes if used correctly(ie Big Pun) 2nd of all if anything some cats on here have a huge vocab and they get too deep into imagery that it becomes more of a poem than a rapverse.