Poetics vs Defined
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-13-05 at 02:22 PM

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Poetics has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 02:23 PM.

Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 03:28 PM.

dont understand wordplay or personals dont vote

disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge
you have such bad Credit....
........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large
your scared, leatherface couldnt compare, your bliss
you Poetic?..text?..you thought it would be Jus-diss
let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more
youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore

I never get concerned about who’s in the lead, I puff Weed
I take on MC’s by the Three’s
Weed out the fake ones that spit from the G’s

Cuz battling Defined is somewhat Disturbin
I’ll beat this fool hella-crunked mad Herbin

U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require
I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire
U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire

U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs
Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives

I gotta say ur presence makes me a little Paranoid
Cuz U so but-ugly Ur looks break Polaroid’s
U words so weak cant get strength taking Steroids

If pain is weakness leaving the Body
Then explain this, why Ur own man passed me the Shoty

I suggest after this one u stop Attemptin
Cuz ur verses are a waste of space, RV is mad Trippin
Look at ur stupid pic, who the fuck do u think ur Reppin

2 young 2 be on here Defined needs parental Discretion
2 top it off his queer-ass needs manly Affection

Im making fun of u cuz I ain’t so Nice
So scratch Ur head like lice, I know Ur Confused
Watch the 6 O’clock News, Ur T.T Crew just left Abused

Life ain’t fair, u so broke and no one could care
So take off that avatar that says Chamillionare

You couldn’t even make a dollar out of 15 Cents
Especially off Ur raps cuz they make no Sense
No one can question that or come 2 ur Defense

That’s why Defined, why you’ll always be Behind
Look at Ur own Sig, U once copied mine

Look at ur profile; smokin, rappin, Fuckin
Ur rap occupation amounts to Nuttin
Battling me! Now hey kid, u may be Somthin

U blocking my light with ur fat ass it's evident
I ain’t just the client, I’m the RV president


g'yaaaaaaaa

(check out Defined's profile to see why i dissed it..and his TT Crew..and faggoty ass descriptions, not to mention his pic)

LMAOOO^^^^....wow i still beat you with only 6 lines....your sorry....uppin for votes

I havnt even started, what u takling bout...
 

i got more to say, more disses to throw ur way... should i open us up another battle...............? :gfy:

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LMAOOOO....up for some eazy votes pls.............

eazy fo-sheazy....i stomped on yo ass wit dis 1....upinggggg............

drop a vote, as an honest one shall be returned.......

LMAO...uppin for more votes please.................

up again for some votes pls......will rtf honestly

upppinngg for some vote's please//...tks.....................

Voted For: Defined

I never get concerned about who’s in the lead, I puff Weed
I take on MC’s by the Three’s
Weed out the fake ones that spit from the G’s
^^^WEak opener
Cuz battling Defined is somewhat Disturbin
I’ll beat this fool hella-crunked mad Herbin
^^^No......punch
U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require
I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire
U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire
^^^No....weak this was jus a run on punch
U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs
Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives
^^^WEak
I gotta say ur presence makes me a little Paranoid
Cuz U so but-ugly Ur looks break Polaroid’s
U words so weak cant get strength taking Steroids
^^^IGht....nuthin special
If pain is weakness leaving the Body
Then explain this, why Ur own man passed me the Shoty
^^^No this shit wwas weak
I suggest after this one u stop Attemptin
Cuz ur verses are a waste of space, RV is mad Trippin
Look at ur stupid pic, who the fuck do u think ur Reppin
^^^Weak
2 young 2 be on here Defined needs parental Discretion
2 top it off his queer-ass needs manly Affection
^^^Ight
Im making fun of u cuz I ain’t so Nice
So scratch Ur head like lice, I know Ur Confused
Watch the 6 O’clock News, Ur T.T Crew just left Abused
^^^^Would of been better if u werded it right
Life ain’t fair, u so broke and no one could care
So take off that avatar that says Chamillionare
^^^ight personal....not really a diss
You couldn’t even make a dollar out of 15 Cents
Especially off Ur raps cuz they make no Sense
No one can question that or come 2 ur Defense
^^^weak punch
That’s why Defined, why you’ll always be Behind
Look at Ur own Sig, U once copied mine
^^^No.....this was wack
Look at ur profile; smokin, rappin, Fuckin
Ur rap occupation amounts to Nuttin
Battling me! Now hey kid, u may be Somthin
^^^Ight
U blocking my light with ur fat ass it's evident
I ain’t just the client, I’m the RV president
^^^Wow.....U must like biggie right lol weak closer

Disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge
you have such bad Credit....
........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large
^^^Good opener
your scared, leatherface couldnt compare, your bliss
you Poetic?..text?..you thought it would be Jus-diss
^^^IGht nuthin to special
let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more
youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore
^^^good closer

V/Defined.....Poetics u need to elavate foreal ur Whole verse was weak no punchs or good diss's jus run on shit...get some punchs an personals up...werd...def u came wit a solid verse it wasnt the best but good enough to get the win.....

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