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Daubs vs GKillaz05
Battle Rules:
16 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Goodluck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 11-11-05 at 02:28 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed - Win by forfeit |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 02:32 PM.
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Snap Daubs like corn cobs,... break him off like the Kernel...
Twist his shit around like door knobs send him asleep for internal... Its your funeral, your personals are all based on false facts... Scared to battle me, called him out N rapidly his pulse reacts... Standin still tryin to ignore it Daubs looks like a rappin statue... It happens when you spit No Boos cuz the crowd is clappin at you... You try to get better step by step but like a ladder fall back... Whats sadder you call it rap,but matter of fact it aint all that... E.C.+Daubs runnin around like 2Losers wit it painted on there head...* Crew wasnt gettin' respect threw raps, so they just hated instead... My lyrics cut up your pre-writes like I had a pair of sizzors kid... Its hard to see Daubs with skill like he was rappin' in a blizzard... Your elevation stays low like a lizzard with the whack stuff u say... In this battle, Daubs walks in... and gets served like a buffet... Rhymes keep fallin' off like a toupee, your only rated 3-Stars...* Crashin' your car into a pole is the only time you drop solid bars... Daubs is always havin' his 'spits out' like a pack of chewin' gum... This junkies rhymes really 'blow' like this whacko was doin' some... Kids punches dont make a loud bang, like lightnin' without thunder... Your record stays under,cuz you got E.C. ghost-writtin' no wonder... First * - Crew is LL, 2Losers Second * - His sig only has 3stars. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 02:57 PM.
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I know you prewrit...but you need it to stand a chance.
I mean, checkin and dropping in like 10 mins, il key this in longer than that lol. Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is so he's quick to clearasil... ...and i dont mean robbin houses You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet. Quote:
So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from cos the last decent person with 14 losses... ...wait there never was one You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor but still you picked up the pencil... ...and tried to draw the smallest straw Fuck you and your prewritten bullshit. |
I know you prewrit...but you need it to stand a chance.
I mean, checkin and dropping in like 10 mins, il key this in longer than that lol. Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is so he's quick to clearasil... ...and i dont mean robbin houses You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet. Quote:
So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from cos the last decent person with 14 losses... ...wait there never was one You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor but still you picked up the pencil... ...and tried to draw the smallest straw Fuck you and your prewritten bullshit. |
Voted For: Daubs
Snap Daubs like corn cobs,... break him off like the Kernel... Twist his shit around like door knobs send him asleep for internal... 2..ok,so you'll twist him around and send him to sleep..no punch in here. Its your funeral, your personals are all based on false facts... Scared to battle me, called him out N rapidly his pulse reacts... 3...No,could have been something good if you used it right. Standin still tryin to ignore it Daubs looks like a rappin statue... It happens when you spit No Boos cuz the crowd is clappin at you... 5....ok... You try to get better step by step but like a ladder fall back... Whats sadder you call it rap,but matter of fact it aint all that... 4....too generic. E.C.+Daubs runnin around like 2Losers wit it painted on there head...* Crew wasnt gettin' respect threw raps, so they just hated instead... 3...again,generic punch and 1st line is played as relating Living Legends with 2 L's/losses had been done a lot. My lyrics cut up your pre-writes like I had a pair of sizzors kid... Its hard to see Daubs with skill like he was rappin' in a blizzard... 3....didn't rhyme,as you had the "kid" part in the 1st line which fucked shit up;punch could have been something with wording. Your elevation stays low like a lizzard with the whack stuff u say... In this battle, Daubs walks in... and gets served like a buffet... 3...played. Rhymes keep fallin' off like a toupee, your only rated 3-Stars...* Crashin' your car into a pole is the only time you drop solid bars... 4...decent punch;but in the 1st line...ripping on sigs is gay. Daubs is always havin' his 'spits out' like a pack of chewin' gum... This junkies rhymes really 'blow' like this whacko was doin' some... 3...again,played...both lines. Kids punches dont make a loud bang, like lightnin' without thunder... Your record stays under,cuz you got E.C. ghost-writtin' no wonder... 7...your best punch. Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago 6...good. Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland 6....cool. He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out 7...nice. Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is so he's quick to clearasil... ...and i dont mean robbin houses 5...decent. You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed 8...nice personal matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet. 6..yea..another good one So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube 4..a dick line.?..meh,it's ok..nothing like the others. canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from cos the last decent person with 14 losses... ...wait there never was one 4...meh,there are a lot of people on this site that are good with 14 losses(and I ain't talking about myself..LoL..I mean other people) You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door 4...bah,weak See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor but still you picked up the pencil... ...and tried to draw the smallest straw 6..good closer. Ok..this shit was one-sided.. Daubs bassically owned the fuck outta Gkillaz in this,honestly. Gkillaz..I think your too generic with your punches.For some reason,a lot of your lines just gave me that "So what?" feeling.I'm guessing that it's your wording.You also had an abundance of played lines.Like the ones about his crew,chewing gum,buffet,and a line about his sig..ya know.. So..yea.. Vote-Daubs Drop an honest vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213948 |
Thanks for the vote NK...
will rtf soon. Even though you owe me one on your pressence account. |
UPPIN...... good spit Daubs, now I know who pressence is...
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Voted For: Daubs
Winter battle? nope, maybe you can fool RV, but me I know season, while im keyin my punches... ...you th' autumn at least a week ago ^^dope, was feelin the wordplay, well done Met M.Jackson and loved it, said you never shaken a better hand cause your punches relate to his theme park...G they neverland ^^shouldnt've used this.... never..ever again fam...bad..lol He struggles to keep his girl satisfied, his sex lifes a doubt cause this bitch used all the balls he got in calling me out ^^lol, ok..... Your face is spotted,yellow and huge...kinda like ya mouth is so he's quick to clearasil... ...and i dont mean robbin houses ^^pronounced different in the uk to here, but i got it..decent You'd fail as a secetary, or any job...even you know this cause it took you more than 40 wins to even get noticed ^^eh,.....basic n weak matta fact your still unkwnown..you aint discover this yet So when i say ima killAZ...i dont mean murdering the alphabet. ^^nope, its good but ive seen it before in "li vs spul" Quote: Originally Posted by GKillaz05 Lets go kid, you think your all that So you refering to me as a child, im sure im older than you cos ya thought ya grew a dick..then realised it wer just a pube ^^seen it before... n heard it b4.... just to played canada weak shit what you got,i aint talking where your from cos the last decent person with 14 losses... ...wait there never was one ^^good flip You can beat a lotta people, maybe africa two, but nothin more So il show you ajar of talent...then kick you through the door ^^lmao, i liked this....good shit See fag, i told you had a chance...but it was just a metaphor but still you picked up the pencil... ...and tried to draw the smallest straw i liked the concept but delivery was ass......bad closing . . daubs overall you had the better verse just from creativity n proper usage of similies/metas/wording... some hard hitting punches that imo were top notch.... good battle..... . . Snap Daubs like corn cobs,... break him off like the Kernel... Twist his shit around like door knobs send him asleep for internal... ^^opener was rather weak bro Its your funeral, your personals are all based on false facts... Scared to battle me, called him out N rapidly his pulse reacts... ^^wasnt feelin this much Standin still tryin to ignore it Daubs looks like a rappin statue... It happens when you spit No Boos cuz the crowd is clappin at you... ^^^decent, ok gunplay i guess You try to get better step by step but like a ladder fall back... Whats sadder you call it rap,but matter of fact it aint all that... ^^concept couldve been delivered better E.C.+Daubs runnin around like 2Losers wit it painted on there head...* Crew wasnt gettin' respect threw raps, so they just hated instead... ^^lol,...funny but simple My lyrics cut up your pre-writes like I had a pair of sizzors kid... Its hard to see Daubs with skill like he was rappin' in a blizzard... ^^ok meta...... Your elevation stays low like a lizzard with the whack stuff u say... In this battle, Daubs walks in... and gets served like a buffet... ^^way to simple yo Rhymes keep fallin' off like a toupee, your only rated 3-Stars...* Crashin' your car into a pole is the only time you drop solid bars... ^^ok, but it wasnt great Daubs is always havin' his 'spits out' like a pack of chewin' gum... This junkies rhymes really 'blow' like this whacko was doin' some... ^^lol,..ok,,, made me laugh Kids punches dont make a loud bang, like lightnin' without thunder... Your record stays under,cuz you got E.C. ghost-writtin' no wonder... ^^imo i thought ya closer was rather weak as was your opener . . the majority of your verse was simplistic, decent text flow but your punches were at best boarderline creative.. it just seems as thou you didnt put much effort into your verse....no hate bro.... it just wasnt a hard hitting verse. |
Thanks a lot Daz,
appreciate it. . |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
checkin' why my name was said in this thread =//........
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you can return the favour on mine n jacks battle if ya want . . but if you dont get shit, just wait till we both explain our verses. |
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
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