"Ain't No Fun In Dying" Feat. Vendetta and Young Montana
 

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Left Feed on Triple and Ike's "Close Me Eyes" and Ike's "Obvious Subliminals"

1st verse: Magik
Hook: Magik
2nd verse: Vendetta
Hook: Magik
3rd verse: Young Montana
Hook: Magik

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Hook it up with some feed, and I will RTF and shiiiit.

Listening...

Beat sounds dope as hell...

Black Magik...Flow is great...I fucking love your flow. Your voice is dope as hell too...nice lyrics as well. Quiality sounds great. Hook is good...keep it up.

Vendetta...Good flow...good lyrics. Nothing wrong with your verse, good shit.

Young Montana...Flow sounded a little bit off in places...You have a lysp on your voice as well...but meh. Lyrics were decent...

Overall decent track...

Keep it up.

I'm feeling this joint. I liked Black's Pack Of Squares line....shit stood out to me :thumbup:™

Vendetta's quality sounded a little eh.......not bad though.

Young Montana didn't really match with the other two artists. He kinda tried to fit too many words in his lines while the other two had smooth flows. Plus his clarity was different than the other two.

Hook was nice, but the flow was off on it a little in the middle.

If you're looking for a collab with someone new, hit me up :thumbup:™

wickity word...

aight welcome back, youngin

Black Magik - nice verse, i like your presence and confidence is hot... lyrics pretty decent, you ownin this beat

Vendetta - the best I ever heard from you but then again I haven't heard tracks from you in a bit, your flow is decent.. your lyrics straight but your presence and delivery is lackin

Young Montana - this seems like the beat itself was a bit of a challenge for you, seems like you coulda came a lil betta on your verse, not necessarily lyrically but delivery-wise and flow wise

Chorus - Pretty straight, the beat omg I want it!

Not bad fellas at all... good to hear from y'all again.
Stay up, just fix the minor probs. then it was sound much better, ya feel
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Uppin...............

tell me u made this beat foggot....

and get on AIM...before i eat you like you do your pet midgets

Ike get your foggot ass on aim. Uppin for feed.

Looking for some fucking feed...

Uppin.............................YO black, holla at me for tha next hit son

upppppppppppppppp

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Ight really good track, i got this beat on my instrumental playlist that i listen to all the time.....but check it....

Intro:
Good intro, basic and simple.

Black:

Usual good timed flow, lyrics could have been a lot better. The bread and bakery line is kinda played, you just need to redesign your lines to make more sense. For example:
"im bout as hot as matches, if you startin the beef, I'm sparkin the heat, that'a have you locked in a casket" - This line didnt have that "wow," and was missing connection throughout the sentence.
You got the flow, you just need to improve on the meaning of your sentences.

Vendetta:

Man, for some reason, your quality sounds like its drownin your voice out. Flow was similar to Blacks. Your lines connected a little more. The sierra line was creative. But your sentence structure is very simple. You didnt take any chances with inner rhyming, but concentrated more on just the rhyming of the last word. Work on that and more emotion. Probably wanna take that reverb off your voice, cause sometimes that will lose your emotion.

YM-
Had a different flow than the others, which i can respect. It makes the track sound better when everyone takes a different approach to the beat. Your lyrics were pretty simple, until you got to the "kell" line, which was pretty impressive. Sentence structure was simple, and work on the adlibs and dubs that you put over your voice. Quality was ok.

Outro
same as intro. But your voice was crackin a little. Might suggest a glass of water or somethin, lol.
Overall decent track. Keep elevatin 7.7/10

Good looks lon the feed...Uppin