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"Lil Ed Diss"...Hot shit...
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Word...this is a battle that I did on another site. I just wanted some feedback for it. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214296 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213974 |
Aight checkin
Lol @ The Intro Russian Dude Or Sumat You Come on LMAO@NNAME OF YA PENIS AHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAH Lyrics-Good Punches Flow-Dope Dont Fall Off Like THis Track Delivery-Is Good You Seem To Go Lower N Higher Vocals Tho:( Presence is Niice Overall GOod Track Plz Rtf On Me N Intermentals :"Pray For Me" http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2535850 ^^link |
A'ight thanks...I'll return the favor right away.
Uppin'... |
Wow at all the fucking sleepers...
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FUCK people sleep these days...
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listening.....
beat is coo.... ok...one thing you gotta work on...when your flowing...let it come out more smooth...like inbetween a lot of words...you kinda hesitate to go with the beat....write to where u just straight up spit and it comes out smooth...without much hesitation... disses were coo....the fucked your moms thing...was kinda played...but its all good...lyrically not bad....delivery was ok....i think once you make more and more tracks...your voice will sound better over the beat...cause your a lil hesitant right now like i said earlier in the post... run with that though...hope i helped out |
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