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BRO YAO 11-13-05 12:28 PM

Roll For This(audio) Hot
 
yea... whatup yall
im back with a hit yo
haha here it is
Songs called ROLL FOR THIS
http://www.soundclick.com/broyao.htm

tell me if ya feel it yall

holla tho

BRO YAO 11-13-05 12:34 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214306
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214374

BRO YAO 11-13-05 10:56 PM

yo yall gotta see wassup

BRO YAO 11-14-05 05:14 PM

i be droppin that feedback shyt and all that muafuckaz

Ebircs 11-14-05 05:50 PM

iight man damn..

this shit is awfull...your voice sounds like u got down syndrome...i cant hear shit ur saying...thats proly why u got no feed man

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 06:42 PM

omfg....... when did the special olympics running team cut a record?????? god damn i cant stop laughing as i write this.. you need to die.

BRO YAO 11-15-05 03:20 PM

wtf, talkin that kinda shyt, man i aint play that shyt, da fuck
tellin me to die, you gotta death wish on ya ass
but on da real, somebody has to be able to understand this

B To The D 11-15-05 03:27 PM

ummmmmmmmmmm ok

i aint gonna leave detailed feed.......as u didnt on mine

but

yeh stand away from the mic yo

i cant understsand wot u sayin

n yo is that ur real voice?

ok i dont like the voice but meh the flows aight what i hear jus put ur mic further back

"Doc" Trin 11-15-05 03:50 PM

no he need to put a helmet on. I mean im no Jay Z but god damn ur horrible. I hope this is all a sick joke.

O.V.Dose 11-15-05 04:06 PM

I like the beat. mic presence is not very good.......im not feeling the voice at all. it basically ruins the track. it makes it hard to understand the lyrics and i couldnt listen to this. lyrics are pretty basic and you dont really say anything new or original. id say up your vocab and try to come more creative. the main thing i suggest is to try a different delivery/voice.

BRO YAO 11-16-05 09:45 AM

yea aigh, i know what yall gettin at with ya feedback...
i know my vocab sucks, aint really good with da big words haha
yea i know i be spittin to close from da mic sometimes to so theres pops and shyt
but ima try to stand further away or some shyt like that
holla tho

∆ P E X X 11-16-05 09:50 AM

No way this is your real voice.....no possible way. You sound like Grimmace on the mic!! AHAHAHAA oh man, honestly, I'd probably listen to every track on your sound click, but not for the reasons you'd think. Fuck man, lol, you gotta drop more tracks.

∆ P E X X 11-16-05 09:53 AM

After like the fourth song, no way in shit is this someone rapping accidentally. You gotta be trying to sound liek this man, seriously. This shit sounds like I-20 calling football plays.

BRO YAO 11-16-05 06:27 PM

haha aigh yo, but na this is my real voice
i get that shyt all da time on da net tho
so i know where you commin from and shyt

holla

ksr 11-16-05 11:19 PM

i listened to some of ur other songs, n ur actually elevatin far as flow/delivery/lyrics go
i hate to say it tho, but i dont think many people are gonna be able overlook ur voice, it makes shit hard to understand, n just sounds weird
no reason u should give up tho, maybe you can find some audio editing effect that will work on it, or find a better way to rap on ur tracks
i dont want to give u 2 much hope, honestly i dont think that rapping is gonna be ur thing, but if u wanna keep at it u should try to change ur weakness (the voice) into a strength... everything that makes u sound different from everyone else has the potential to stick out n ruin ur tracks, or to become some dope unique shit

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