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veyetal 11-13-05 04:50 PM

chowie chow vs veyetal
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
Word

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-16-05 at 04:50 PM

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System 11-13-05 04:51 PM

Chowie Chow has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-05 04:51 PM.

System 11-13-05 04:52 PM

veyetal has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-05 04:52 PM.

veyetal 11-13-05 05:24 PM

aight, aight....so, chowie, college boy eh, lets go

a clean sweep in this battle, this dudes a fucking mess
cram so many punches in your head, you'll get an A on your next test
cast you away from the rest, you dont have feel on the real
shit, you couldn't land a decent hit, with no one in the field
you act that thug shit, think you pimpin bitches with a huge ass gun
well after you're done bragging bout 22 barrels, i roll you down a hill in one
knock you around, my punches crack you so high, you're left with the munchies
shit, your lyrics wouldn't be worth a dam, if they powered the country

bitch, peace out

Chowie Chow 11-14-05 03:59 PM

Trying to clean out another win against me
Your just going to get swepted up like debris
Who are you OGs, Drakel, The Establishment, Kesse
No one knows, I'll help you out, lend you my GPS
You mine as well make another alias after this
Cause you'll be too ashamed and will never see bliss
Just diggin a deep hole, end up in chinatown, with no one to help you
Just locked up Veyetals name, hopefully he'll get out of his deja vu

Street Disciple 11-14-05 04:04 PM

Voted For: veyetal

Both were garbage ya'll niggas need to elevate but veyetal won cus chowies punch lines I couldn't figure out how they were dissin really, and in the second line of veyetals verse it was like he was complimentin.

Germ 11-14-05 04:10 PM

Voted For: veyetal

polls.............................................

Germ 11-14-05 04:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Street Disciple
Voted For: veyetal

Both were garbage ya'll niggas need to elevate but veyetal won cus chowies punch lines I couldn't figure out how they were dissin really, and in the second line of veyetals verse it was like he was complimentin.


hey, i challenge you, because you're an idiot

veyetal 11-16-05 03:57 PM

upp this shit.....................................

Blackmage 11-16-05 04:14 PM

Voted For: veyetal

Here's what I saw

Trying to clean out another win against me
Your just going to get swepted up like debris
GOES WELL BUT PUNCH WAS SORTA WEAK
Who are you OGs, Drakel, The Establishment, Kesse
No one knows, I'll help you out, lend you my GPS
FIRST LINE MAKES YOU THINK A SERIOUS PERSONAL'S COMIN BUT LET DOWN
You mine as well make another alias after this
Cause you'll be too ashamed and will never see bliss
AIGHT PERSONAL, PUNCH WAS A LIL WEAK
Just diggin a deep hole, end up in chinatown, with no one to help you
Just locked up Veyetals name, hopefully he'll get out of his deja vu
MEH...WASN'T REALLY FEELIN THIS ONE

a clean sweep in this battle, this dudes a fucking mess
cram so many punches in your head, you'll get an A on your next test
PRETTY GOOD PUNCH AT FIRST BUT NOT HOT AT 2ND GLANCE
cast you away from the rest, you dont have feel on the real
shit, you couldn't land a decent hit, with no one in the field
LIKE LAST ONE, RAW AT FIRST, JUST GOOD ONCE YOU THINK
you act that thug shit, think you pimpin bitches with a huge ass gun
well after you're done bragging bout 22 barrels, i roll you down a hill in one
DAMN, I ACTUALLY LAUGHED, GOOD PUNCH
knock you around, my punches crack you so high, you're left with the munchies
shit, your lyrics wouldn't be worth a dam, if they powered the country
LAUGHED AT THIS ONE TOO BUT THOUGHT ABOUT IT AND FELT STUPID FOR LAUGHING

Pretty much veytal's punches were still better and when you first look at them you think it's raw, then you think about it and it takes the quality down a lil but it's still pretty raw.
eg. you don't cram punches, i thought pages might've been funnier but hey, who the hell am I right?

v/Veyetal
RTF B's

veyetal 11-17-05 10:03 AM

uppping this shit....................................

Adam 11-17-05 01:01 PM

Voted For: veyetal

blisss is waaay better, and i droped cooler punches.

Spektikul 11-17-05 03:31 PM

Voted For: Chowie Chow

Chowies more gangsta.......

Werd.

CHOWSAAAAAA!!!

veyetal 11-23-05 09:05 PM

^ so gay............................................... .

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-24-05 04:48 PM

Voted For: veyetal

much better verse, i liked that damn line, clever.
no need for a break down of bars this couldnt of been more 1 sided if it was circle.....chowie, i got no clue wtf you were doing, but it wasnt rap yo


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