Can I get a...Freestyle
 

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Chea, yo

Can I get a fuck that! Towards niggas wit' no slacks.
Claimin' they bangin' with no name brand throw backs//1
Always PRESENTABLE towards hoes wit' interlectuals.
Tell em to take interCOURSE classes so they shit is extendable//2
Wash em off like VEGETABLES walk away left shocked.
crush cunts like the particles between the soil 'n bed rocks//3
Do they need a BASKET so they take my cum then spit out?
Talkin' bull will get you a toilet so I can throw that shit out//4
What about you FAKE DUDEZ that just give a nigga bad newz?
Let you drink bad water so u can spit out me some igloos//5
Can't see me workin' long hours then some niggas is all sour.
Just like the outage in NYC last year, I'll shut off all ya power//6

muthafuckas...Can I get a fuck you..

This was aight homeboy...

feelin a few metas you had, punches were aight for the most part...only bar I wasnt feeling was that bad water line...rest was dopeness playa.

Illest lines:
Can't see me workin' long hours then some niggas is all sour.
Just like the outage in NYC last year, I'll shut off all ya power//6
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That shit is RAW as fuck my nigga, keep it up yo.


Can I get a fuck that! Towards niggas wit' no slacks.
Claimin' they bangin' with no name brand throw backs//1
Always PRESENTABLE towards hoes wit' interlectuals.
Tell em to take interCOURSE classes so they shit is extendable//2
Wash em off like VEGETABLES walk away left shocked.
crush cunts like the particles between the soil 'n bed rocks//3
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Wordplay is dope right here, you got some skills bwoy.

Keep it up yo, shit was actually prettyy nice, I'm impressed, good job.

Peace, B EZ

this was mos def aiiiigh fo a freestyle my nigz....the wordplay was there, ok multies and it flowed...very important...it flowed...keep up.


Always PRESENTABLE towards hoes wit' interlectuals.
Tell em to take interCOURSE classes so they shit is extendable//2
Wash em off like VEGETABLES walk away left shocked.
crush cunts like the particles between the soil 'n bed rocks//3

^ good stuf...mos def potential..

this was nice for a freestyle, the multies were cool and flowed nicely. some lines that i liked were :

Always PRESENTABLE towards hoes wit' interlectuals.
Tell em to take interCOURSE classes so they shit is extendable//2
Wash em off like VEGETABLES walk away left shocked.
crush cunts like the particles between the soil 'n bed rocks//3

^^ that shit was cool right there, loved it.

Can't see me workin' long hours then some niggas is all sour.
Just like the outage in NYC last year, I'll shut off all ya power//6

^^thats hot too

I like ur stuff man, nice job Peace.