Wicked One vs Snipes
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate
and etc...............

3-ko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-15-05 at 01:34 AM

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Snipes has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 07:51 PM.

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 10:56 PM.

mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights
i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe
people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right
if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight"
if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might"
cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice//

Wicked One
G/L
Btw i havent battled in a minute

My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five...
Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line...
And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes...
I’ve almost made this place mine...
Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred...
And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid...
Actually, that’s what I just done did...

nice drop man and now upping dis shit...................

damn ma lines are to long..............................

Voted For: Snipes

snipes has a more solid verse..it acctually seems like he put effort into his... while wicked ones verse seems mor like "i dont give a fuck" drop........

punches are nearly even..but snipes just edged ahead
flow is again even but snipes verse seems to connect better thru out..
multis go to wicked one...snipes is simple rhymed.

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This was feedback posted for Snipes
 

checking pollz.......................

vote bitches i'm getting piss off......................

Voted For: Wicked One

Ok..this battle was filled up with too much "gore".Not enough disses in my opinion.
Both of you had a nice flow,But at times..snipes would stretch his lines.Like the ambulance/batman bar..that was stretched out.Wicked One kept his lines shorter,which made for a better flow.
As for punches,well,like I said..too many gore lines.But Wicked one still had this aspect.He still said Snipes is one the jakes side and is fake,which is a diss.

I didn't see one diss in Snipes verse..it was all him talking about himself.

Vote-Wicked One

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