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villagepimp 11-16-05 02:18 PM

New VP Audio!
 
Fuck That Trick ft. Slicky C

Okay... this is a song with my fellow crew mate in KC's Finest, Slicky C (I'm looking for technical feedback. I know the lyrics are wack. But We're trying to figure out what we need to do different). This was our first recording session. Check the rest of the s'click for my other shit if interested but leave me feed on this song!

Beat by Ozone Beats

Left feed on
C Walk - Emotional Matters
Doc "Trin" - What Happened To Love

Enygma 11-19-05 10:20 AM

Since you were crying.....I guess I'll leave a little feed.

First of all, you need to use the millions of tracks that Cool Edit provides for you instead of trying to do the whole song (including the Hook) in one take......wow. VP was pretty wack. Lyrics were kinda blah as well as flow. You fell off on the flow a lot. Quality was ass......Second dude was a little better with the flow, but he was still kinda wack. I suggest you learn how to use the seperate tracks because that would benifit you greatly......so you can seperate the hook from the regular verses. Plus, read a tutorial or two on how to make your quality sound better.....I suggest the Day 1 Audio Tutorial by Enygma ;)

Do both of these and I guarantee that your shit will be like ten times better :thumbup:™

villagepimp 11-20-05 03:33 PM

Thanks... but I don't have cool edit... someone needs to help with this...

And this is why I did a wack ass track to get some technical feed... why make a great track sound like shit when you can do a shit track with shit quality.


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