Black Dragon - Aim for the Head
 

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juss a freeverse on tha Swizz Beats "aim for the head"

http://rideinconline.com/play.php?b...&mode=song_hifi
or
http://www.rideinconline.com/bands/466/
or
www.soundclick.com/qckillahz

pz

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beat is dope, I like the originally song.
the quality is decent,
your flow is choppy as hell
and the ending is like..WTF!? "will be missin you"
thats what that said? lmfao @ that.
its waay too short to.
elevate man, work on mainly your flow.

flow is mad off sone good beat you could prolly made it ten times better if you didnt sound like it was hard for you to think of that shit... but not to bad

sample/intro nice..... beat good.... flow sounds forced...not casual...allmost as if you can tell you just wrote this and your reading it for the first time...
lyrics are ok..nothing too special....
weird ending.

aiite..........'preciate feedback...................