I Gotta Death Wish
 

Yet Again, Check This Out And Let Me Know What You Think.
I Wrote This When I Was A Bit Down, So Sorry For The Depressed Vibe!

They Say Smokin' Kills,
Man I Don't Care,
I'd Rather Die Breathin' Smoke Than Livin' In Air,

And I Gotta Say That Life Is Overated,
Cos When Your Dead At Least You Know That You Won't Be Hated

I Was Born To Live,
Now I'm Livin' To Die,
Don't Ask Me Any Questions Cos' I Don't Know Why

I Don't Care If I Go To Hell Or Up In The Sky,
It's All Good To Me Just As Long As I Die,

Cos I've Had Enough Of Bein' Skint,
I've Had Enough Of Not Fucking A Bint,

I've Sure Had Enough Of The Daily Struggle,
I'd Shoot Myself Dead But It Ain't That Subtle,

That' Why I Got A Death Wish,
It Ain't Been Granted Yet,
I Keep Rubbin' On The Lamp,
Ain't Dead So I Start To Fret

I Ain't Got No Lover,
I Ain't Got No Babies,
It Just Adds To My Struggle,
Man It Drives Me Crazy

Everyday I See My Friends Do Good,
I Ain't Gonna Do Well,
But I Wish I Would,

It's Kinda Hard When You Fall Behind Your Peers,
That's Why Im Sat In My Room And I'm Drinkin' Beers

Oh Why Oh Why Does God Ignore My Prayer,
To Be Dead In The Mornin'
Even He Don't Care

But When The Lord Does Lay My Ass Down To Rest,
He'll Ask Me If I'm Happy, And I'll Say Yes

again very nice bro,

even better than the other one i saw from you a few mins ago. Real heart-felt here, emotion was all the way thru the piece.

a few bars i particularly liked:

They Say Smokin' Kills,
Man I Don't Care,
I'd Rather Die Breathin' Smoke Than Livin' In Air,

And I Gotta Say That Life Is Overated,
Cos When Your Dead At Least You Know That You Won't Be Hated

Honestly a lot of potential is with you here. Where in UK u from???

I'm from Hastings. Soz didn't write sooner, had my boss lookin' over my shoulder at work. It's good to see another Brit MC.
It's hard to get feedback from my mates cos they're all into Drum and Bass, so they think anything I do is good.
But the one thing I'm well happy to have is a wicked DJ. He scratches like Premier, no lie.
My raps are quite simple, but he just punctuates it and lets me flow.
It's a pity I don't have a PC at home cos I'd post some of the shit I've done with him.

Where u from then?

nice drop i feel ya...ive wrote many songs of this nature in my time life sucks dats why u fuck da world feel me? holla back peace

Nice piece. I felt a lot of emotion comin from this.
Some lines that i liker were:

I Was Born To Live,
Now I'm Livin' To Die,
Don't Ask Me Any Questions Cos' I Don't Know Why

But When The Lord Does Lay My Ass Down To Rest,
He'll Ask Me If I'm Happy, And I'll Say Yes

Those were pretty nice. Overall i'd give it an 8.5/10. Keep it up man. :thumbup: