when the pin drops.
 

i lurk in the rough, stabbin words through idle hearts... verbals in love-
ignite to the highest point and summon the darkness while golden clouds encircle above..--
a circle of doves swivel by civilized as civil eyes glance with symbolized pride... -- simple minds blind to the facts, they whisper why I?.....
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why cry, when the water could be used to wash our sins away.. rinse n spray our wits, decayed.. not using scripts to pray, -- cause facts we've found are clapsed around our every motion since the day --

--that day we were whisked away--

but i, escaping to the mind's fortress.. great walls of fires rise from earth to fight off divine forces....-
- shine torches upon wisdom stuck in the mold that are nothin, we're told.. steadily showing you statements, that reveal thoughts of cranial playwrites when going through stages... ((..so are you going to face it?..))

...or are you doubtin the truth, don't be surprised if reality is stout n' obtuse -- cuz i've witnessed screamin demons play marco polo in the fountain of youth...

... go head, shout in the booth, pull out in the coupe if you can take you a car... but being welded on to menorahs couldn't make you a star...
- with ya fake jewels n all, disgracing the name our founders engraved through the fog -

....natives sweeping paths that we've scarred up past brooms, point me in any given direction - i'll end up in a starbuck's bathroom... n' in the end, it's hard bucks passed due..

-plus it's hardly a secret.. that it was subtle sign from other sides that got the mardy gras peeps wet....
....party yall, speed, cess.. at the age where fear's a thin thought, when the beer n gin stop....

....witness the violence n weep, soul searching reveals a silence so deep....

you could hear a pin drop.

..out.

browser only allows me to have a certain amount of characters at once.. had to double post.. and excuse the structure, it was kind of a free flow..

but yea.. :) .. feed up please.

*links coming*

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214659
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215057

.......NOW FEED.

bump...........

Thats my favorite line right there.I really like this topic. Structure was definitely messed up tho but i understand it was a free flow. Ur vocab was pretty good and the flow seemed fine to me. Keep postin man, i like ur stuff :thumbup:

thanks.

bump........^