"Not A Place To Be"(mixtape track)
 

"Not A Place To Be"(ghost)
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APPEX-GET HOED
WILL APPEAR-Take my Shine

i will RTF on feed.

beat choice is okay. it is what it is.

First verse: your lyrics are on and speak some real truth. The flow's on about 70% of the time, other times, it's one sylable somewhere that's making you force your rhymes together in one line. The main downside to his track is the emotion, which is gonna get sharper as you keep spittin, and the mixing. The emotion in the lyrics coulda brought this up, and the mixing could have brough it out. Good track, just not the best assembly. Don't feel bad, you're not doing anything that I wasn't doing that about the same time into this. The shit that's off comes with time to build, like a muscle. Real talk as always. BTW,


Kill all rats. Your rat is my rat.
snitch not, slip not.

alright beat is cool not one of my choices
flow was off a little bit like appex said you jsut had to rush it
quality waqsnt horrible but it wasnt god
like appex said ur emotion was really lacking but its all good thats what i lacked in and ive elevated alot there overall cool track get at me about a collab

nice track... beats nice... flow is on point for the most part.. quality needs a little work, maybe step away from the mic when your spitting.. seems like your too close.. the lyrics are tight... overall good drop son...

Drop some feed on the joint in my sig.. please..

good loox
uppin

one motime uppin

sorry it took so long...lol

aiight.... i always liked this beat so ya get kudos for that

content:lyrics were aiight.... i focus on lyrics when i hear tracks so i'm real critical when it comes to that.... you're one of the few kats who actually puts messages in they shyt... that's a plus... but.... you also need to find an original way to flip it..that's a minus.... so ya cancelled out in this category.... not good... but not bad.... AVERAGE

Flow:... ok for da most part... still need to work on filling in da spaces.... it has to be consistant all the way thru... can't flow then get choppy when ya get stuck on an idea... find the work around and keep ya flow on point.... the old addage says practice makes perfect... you'll get it... but only if ya practice....AVERAGE

quality... better than mine when i first started but still needs work... not sure what ya need to do to fix it cuz people like certain sounds and effects... find your sound... master it... but most importantly make sure that we can hear you clearly and ya levels are the same throughout

emotion: work on it.... if you don't believe what you saying at least convince ya audience that you believe what you saying.... in turn, ya audience will believe what ya saying and connect with you a lot better... feel me?... rapping is a lot like acting... you gotta get into character and PERFORM ya song... you just can't spit the words at people and think it's gonna be aiight with everyone... HOW you spit makes a difference

not bad overall but like the rest of us there's always room for elevation... holla at the mad dog battle if ya get a chance... kats is sleepin'