Tie-D vs Kamze
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-22-05 at 11:41 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Closed - win by forfeit

Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-05 11:43 AM.

Tie-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-22-05 04:46 AM.

Kid aint even close so certainly no cigar
and I bet he disses my 0-2 record in his first bars
Kamze’s from uk? In his profile uses the word “soccer”
He’ll only ever elevate on a broom wiv Harry Potter
But he aint here to elevate just to masquerade
10 battles in that small posts how many cats been played?
certainly an alias I got no reason to doubt that
Ive batted you for six then caught you out…howzat!?!?**

**il explain it cos he likes cricket and that’s a cricket saying “howzat

This Kid's Tryna Beat Me, He Just Can't See, I'm Too Hot To Handle,
How Could He You Represent To Fight, When You Can't Even Win A Battle,
I'll Shorten This Bitch's Life, Too More Than Just A Couple Of Days,
We Know It's A Straight Road To The Bottom, So At Least He Ain't Gay,
I'll Put This Bitch Through Alot, Cause He's Nothing More Than A Pussy,
Cuz I'm Knocking This Bitch Too Pieces, So We Should Call Him UnTie-D,

2nd line - His avy says lone soldier, so he could represent,
cause he hasn't even won a battle on his rec.

Meh, REAL quick goingout, and i didn't want to no-show.

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Voted For: Kamze

Tie-D:
Kid aint even close so certainly no cigar
and I bet he disses my 0-2 record in his first bars
2/10 - No Diss.
Kamze’s from uk? In his profile uses the word “soccer”
He’ll only ever elevate on a broom wiv Harry Potter
1/10 - No Rhyme.
But he aint here to elevate just to masquerade
10 battles in that small posts how many cats been played?
3/10 - OK Punch.
certainly an alias I got no reason to doubt that
Ive batted you for six then caught you out…howzat!?!?
2/10 - Hmmmm.
8/40

You had an ok flow, but your punches wernt there, and no wordplay.


Kamze:
This Kid's Tryna Beat Me, He Just Can't See, I'm Too Hot To Handle,
How Could He You Represent To Fight, When You Can't Even Win A Battle,
2/10 - Didnt like it.
I'll Shorten This Bitch's Life, Too More Than Just A Couple Of Days,
We Know It's A Straight Road To The Bottom, So At Least He Ain't Gay,
4/10 - ok wordplay.
I'll Put This Bitch Through Alot, Cause He's Nothing More Than A Pussy,
Cuz I'm Knocking This Bitch Too Pieces, So We Should Call Him UnTie-D,
2/10 - NO
8/30

You had one good bar, the rest didnt really connect, but your flow was good.


Vote - Kamze ( I know you's tied 8-8, but Kam came harder with his one line, if he had one more he would have won)

This was feedback posted for Kamze
 

you took this pal...................................

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Voted For: Kamze

nicce

bets line-I'll Put This Bitch Through Alot, Cause He's Nothing More Than A Pussy,
Cuz I'm Knocking This Bitch Too Pieces, So We Should Call Him UnTie-D,

worst line- (none)

over all- amazin punches rhymes well

Vote-Kamze

Voted For: Kamze

Kid aint even close so certainly no cigar
and I bet he disses my 0-2 record in his first bars
^^^weak opener
Kamze’s from uk? In his profile uses the word “soccer”
He’ll only ever elevate on a broom wiv Harry Potter
^^^WEak
But he aint here to elevate just to masquerade
10 battles in that small posts how many cats been played?
^^^Ight punch
certainly an alias I got no reason to doubt that
Ive batted you for six then caught you out…howzat!?!?**
^^^No weak closer

his Kid's Tryna Beat Me, He Just Can't See, I'm Too Hot To Handle,
How Could He You Represent To Fight, When You Can't Even Win A Battle,
^^^Good opener
I'll Shorten This Bitch's Life, Too More Than Just A Couple Of Days,
We Know It's A Straight Road To The Bottom, So At Least He Ain't Gay,
^^^Nice punch mixed wit the personal this was good
I'll Put This Bitch Through Alot, Cause He's Nothing More Than A Pussy,
Cuz I'm Knocking This Bitch Too Pieces, So We Should Call Him UnTie-D,
^^^Ight closer
Overall this was a onesided battle....tie u came wit weak punchs that really didnt diss kamze....kam u came wit a solid verse that had good punchs u get the win...V/Kamze
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Voted For: Tie-D

Tie-D- your verse was aight...i mean a plain and simple verse n all...Your punches were aight...some were played & a little were a little weak but they were good enough too win this battle with better punches...Structure was good n all easy to read...personals had little...but overall you get the win with better punches...close battle tho...

Kamze- your verse was aight...punches were weak n all some were a little out played n shit...structure was blah...Had some good personals tho but personals are good enough but they didnt make your punches that good so overall you did aight like i said a very close battle...


Vote switched

Aghhh shit voted for the wrong person...ill get this fixed ....and i explained it wrong too...my bad...will get FIXED tho...

Yo man it's cool, mistakes happen bro. It's cool doesn't really matter.