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"Addicted" Feat. Alpha Assassin...New Collab...
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yes..L.E..collabed wit that same kid that dropped Microsoft Rap from a while a back..but i been elevatin off the website..and this just sumthin small i did wit L.E...i still feel wack in my opinion :( but anyways leave feedback and i'll RTF
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ok typing as I listen....nice sample on intro......awww the quality is wack on limited's verse...flow is koo tho...the dleivery is koo in the parts that dun fade out....aww the quality is horrible its killing the song....the hook's quality really killing it.....alpha comes in wit slightly better quality...but his flow is choppy an he's stumbling on words..gotta work on pronounciation...delivery had no emotion...but thats do to the flow..I imagine he was concentrating so hard on trying to hit snare that he aint notice.....couldn't make out lyrics by either...quality really killed this track......if the quality was better it woulda been sum much better....lmao@ outro "whatever the fuck the other guy's name is".....wow that was fucked up..but funny.....nice beat choice yall but the vocals was VERY flawed..this coulda been alot more but ncie effort keep dropping an elevating..stay up.....1
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:( :( :( :( like i said i still need lotz ta work on but im gettin there..im stickin wit slower beats from now on so i can spit easier wit the level im at right now...but i know im improvin..especially from the last drop i did on rv a long time back...but im gon drop every single day and get better wit each song..and i have better quality but the filter i used kinda lowered the quality but it sounded good at the time lol..thanx for the feed...i defitnly will get better..only way from the bottom is to the top right?...keep the feedback flowin ya'll
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i dunno how good yo mic iz bu u make tha quality sound good.
got flow hook iz koo, kinda weird flow tho, u know 2nd guy, hmmmm, duzznt really flow that good wif tha beat, werk on ya flow. quality aint tha best either. yeah mayn, u got sum werk 2 do. keep doin ya thang spuccaz rtf pleeze! http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548 werd |
Wow...didn't even know this got such little feedback...
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LE...can hear too much wind in ur vocals....
ur flow is nice here though...like the tone of ur delivery on the track...it fits Hook is interesting...maybe ADLIB it who is this 2nd cat?...sounds like he's talking or something... not feeling his "flow" at all...eeh eeh his lyrics are better than his delivery of them though I actually like the hook and how you delivered it not a bad track...but Alpha needs to up his flow/delivery/emotion 1 |
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i already got that down now i just need ta record sumthin new..this track aint my best |
beat is nice man...flow is ok...quality is nice...i like ur voice...lyrics r iight...u remind me of my boy...hook is ok...2nd dude...flow is a bit off..he is spittin to close to the mic...lyircs is..ehhhh..quality is ass...hook..3rd dude..oh..no 3rd verse...ok then !!
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216660 RTF..plz... 1nE |
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