Shine
 

our newest track from the group....



my boy killed it.....leave feedback for both artists please....so my boy can get his shit too...


Shine


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215021
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215134

come on man wheres the feed...leave a link and ill rtf

peein now

production:Damn thats a hot beat but its sampled yet again but hot:8.5/10
Flow:aight the first person ya flow was good....you shoulda turned up ya vocals up a lil more tho:8/10,2nd person sounded the same as the first person it was good tho:8/10,3rd Person his flow was ehh...aight....wasn't that great and quality was ass:7/10
Pressesne:1rst Person was good vocals were too low tho:7.8/10,2nd person same thing:7.8/10
Emotion:All of ur emotions were the same through out the whole beat put more emphesis into wat ur sayin in ur lines:7.8/10
Overall:Overall this track was decent nothin too special ya'll need too work on the emotion and mixing and ya'll would be better:7.5/10

Keep um coming fam

Retrun The Favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215243

ok right off the bat....ur quality for audio recording is realli low...(first rapper) shits nice i liek ru lyrics keep it uo kid seriously u ahve some potential just work on audio balencing....

chorus..o damn...sorry but that isnt what i expected tha quality got worse...

rapper 2 sounds like he's rappin on a computer mic and his volcals sound realli realli blocked...then he gets low...a lil off beat...

"remember" im not an asshole im just very critical

overall it was a good track just needs to be worked aight? ya'll will do better next time

yo dope track..........1st Verse, flows on point, you ride the beat real well, i like da concept of the song....

2nd Verse- Flows on point, and your gettin your point across, quality is good , feelin ya style man......

Hook - not feelin da hook, quality could be upped, too simplistic....

3rd Verse - Flows on most of the time, quality could be upped, delivery could be worked on.....feelin First MC more thoe......

Overall Dope Track....keep em comin...

pz

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RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435

thanks for the feedback keep that shit coming...

feedback needed....ill rtf

Ahh i like that beat...pretty good choice...

1st Guy - Ahh..i like , nice flow rides the beat really well, really though the lyrics/content of teh verse is really night and even incorperates a little vocab and complexity which i like alot...good job to this dude...the only thing that could be changed is that a like 1 spot the beat overrides the voice slightly..could just be my speakers but thats what i hear...

Hook - I Dont really liek the hook..i think you guys could have done better with that..and the transition from person to person is kinda off cuz you just pop up and it doesnt sound exactly right...

Second Guy - Content was pretty nice , sometimes generic but overally the lyrics were there, the flow gets off in a few spots but for the most part you got the flow and the presence picks up that also...Turn down mic a little bit because it makes it sound bad when your so Loud that its hard to understand...

The end sample fits well..the only thing is that the track just turns off..it would sound better if you faded taht sample out or something cuz when it just turns off it takes a certain finality from it...

overally though pretty nice track...the 1st guy was really nice in starting it off and last guy did pretty well bringing it home just a few things wrong..

8.7/10

feedback wanted....rtf if link is left

you all are very inactive on this site lol....sleepin on me ....haha....leave some links and ill rtf