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alright this is for the rapgame it turned out ok lol at my mom : /


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I liked this, had holiday spirit...little sisters were cute as hell Willa.

I liked your fast flow in the beginning, you kind of died down at the end started to get lazy and meh not so good...ur mom had a good touching speach lol. and HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO HER!

overall 8/10 stay up girl

lmao @ yo sister at tha beginin. i like yo voice. this wuz nice. haha, yo moms. dam @ how mad yo moms gon b at me wen i git tha shoes n she caynt barrow them :thumbup: haha. flow at tha beginin wuz betta, i liked how u went right fast.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215548

holla back, werd

the intro sounds wierd buts its cool. your flow is good and emotion is some what dry. you should use dubs some what to give it some flavour and lol @ your mom lol is that really your mom?

lol but it's not bad.

alright paranoid ill get you when you drop ur new track liek you said
mystic same wiht you
kool i returned the favor
and yea lol i had my track done last night cause apexx said it was due this morning on accident lol so i recorded at like 2 in the morning i was mad tired lol : /

word....sister was cute at the beginning...

beat is nice...

flow is nice...your def. getting better step by step....lol @ last line...."your socks"

lol mom part was coo....overall good job on this

AAAAAAAAAHAHAHHAHAAHHA. AAAAAAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHA.. AAAAAAAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA... damn son AHAHAHAAHAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA

oohhman. I felt like I was listening to a Disney "don't do drugskids!" special at the start, till I heard you call your man a fuck up. Flow's ill on this. lmao @ the uppercut. LMAO @ sox.

oh boy..here comes the mom...damn..::sniff:: I almost feel bad about everything I've done wrong after listneing to your sweet ol mom. Yeah. Almost. Damn, I'm gonna have to listen to this track again...but unless you live with your boyfriend, this definitely dosen't sound like a track about a guardian. Hmm....

damn i love my fam no questioning that its fact
i love my dad why hes a fuck up nowi know that ill never be like that
but damn its love hate relationship so many times i cried i was left alone
oh well hell i got a mom raised me alone its like she made of stone
but yo wanna know who i love the most easily my little sisters theyre my world
aces the best hand in live couldnt ask for more than my little girls
just no this worlds cold itll leave you all alone
the price of llife is only as rich as the one who owns the soul
ive grown cold to god my aunts been gone for a little while
i dont know how the one i loved was ripped away from her only chil
that smiles cute robin time to say prayer tell your mom you love her
im greatful for my little sisters and my soon to be possibly little brother
amber and j damn you gots a kid its time to wake up
i love you enough to hit u wiht an uppercut
im thankful for the support my fam gives me nonj stop
come on appex i cant climb to the top in my socks
naw its all abotu dif family members theres the lyrics

nice nice nice i likes the lyriks was str8 the beat was koo the flow was on point,the wordplay was simple but koo nice holiday spirit,LoL @ yo sister the intro was cute your momz koo she sound like that kind of momz to kick it with
feel me!
ill give this drop a 7.5/10
keep dropping koo shit like this and RTF.

Amanda... it came across unfinished beloved. :(

But, I loved the beat & the intro. with ya baby sis. Your flow was nearly on point... I didnt care for the intermitten high pitch on your vocals every stanza conjuction. However it didnt hinder anything... just established Will appear's style. ;)

Nice audio fams, keep droppin. you're gettin' better every time lovely, keep it up.

Peace.

Lol this was cute.

The lil sisters in the beggining was adorable. Christmas charlie brown hip hop type shit. Your flow is good and I'm not a pervert, but you move your tounge very good. You having your mom on it was like :wtf: its like that busta rhymes and martha stewert award show thing. I liked though.

lol @ begining, ya sis be dope.
but word, ya flow is hot as hell on here
i think it go perfect with the mood of this track, knowing me i wouldve prolly still done some club ass shit on a song bout my family, lmao...
but word ya lyrics be coo..

ya mom definetly dont sound comfortable on the mic though, lol
but its def dope
i like how she say she gon take ya shoes, i hope she do :love:
and word to the end...i like that "mom....mom?"

nice job willlllzzaaa baby :cool:

alright ghost i hit up ur track mentalz ive left feed on all ur pieces already lol : /indeph waiting for u to drop a new audio tizzy what would u liek me ot hit up?

ok i still love your flow and alwayz will but it seems like you wrote part of the song one day and part of it another day because the flow at first was really fast and fluid but then it kinda died out. i dunno, maybe you just stopped feelin it after a certain point. your sister sounds so cute, i really liked the holiday spirit. ya voice is still sexy, good delivery and everything......rofl at your mom, i hope she really does take your shoes lol. yo, i wanna collab with your mom, i was really feelin her flow lmao

alright thanx mak appreciate it