Its Been A Long Time Coming(My Best Track!) Ill RTF
 

Speats-Its Been A Long Time Coming
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3145911&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3145911&q=hi
www.soundclick.com/speatsproductions


left feed on Invektive's track and tha q's track about girls

BTW THEYRES A PLACE IN THE SONG WHERE I SAY: SO I FUCKED MY MOM'S 6 MONTH, IT MEENS I RUINED IT, BUT THE WAY IT COMES OUT ITS LIKE IF I FUCKED HER LOL

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Listening...

Beat sounds coo so far...

Quality is meh...flow sounded a little choppy...lyrics are pretty deep...Flow was off and on...delivery was lacking...you had the right direction but didnt quite make it there.

Not your best...hook was pretty good.

Keep it up.

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just put ur SC page up cuz i cant get to the song

flow's choppy, and to change that make ur bars the same length, work on ya delivery put more emotion........feelin da concept, but work on the above and it'll be strate......

pz

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rtf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435

aight cool.. i'mma hit u wit some feed.. You being the bigger man and all.. anyway...Beat fits what yah saying alot, emotioal and deep shit.. Yah quality is kinda lacking alot of High parts, yah need to do some Hard Limiting On it.. And yah Chours needs some effects to Distinguish it from the rest of the song.. But The Chours Is good i'm liking it..its dope as fuck.. whos that chick in it? But Yo i'm feeling yah lyrics and yah flow is mostly on point, But Up yah quality and this would be alot better. but word good track, first one i heard from yah..

thx man appreciate alot, this track meens alot for me

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-listenz

coo beat man,flow is cool quality is str8 but coul work on that the lyriks is pretty deep emotional shit man im feelin it,flow is right on point on topic is cool no lie man a nice drop keep this shit up yo this is a dope drop homie!i was feelin it no joke im lookin forward in another drop from you!
RTF (face of a thug)

thanks imma leave feed