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NotoriousM vs talon
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No D/R or i'll kill you. Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-05-05 at 01:10 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
talon has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 07:20 PM.
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big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow
shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer this may just be a key, but my words open doors he's still in the closet....locked away in his drawers smack this fool with capitols, knocking him backwards, take a peek just look at NM, his progression only leads him to an L, see? i laugh at his gay name, and doesn't make sense, i might add well, if notorious is as whack as his rep, then yeh, the dude is bad fuck it, quick key, you ain't coming with anything better |
NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-05-05 08:04 AM.
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I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds...
Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red... While i'm takin' shots at ya head, you just sittin' there jerkin' off... This battle was over before it started, I'm the one u see merkin' slobs... Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson... My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'... Your raps are weak, no flow, Mine keep comin', there instantanious... There ain't no denying it, your a lil' punk bitch, your raps are heinous... Your Gettin' fucked like an anus, Homie that ain't the way you get layed... You Like a Fucken Gameboy G, The way ur fucken ass get played... Done |
Voted For: NotoriousM
NotoriousM - iight spit, you had a good flow, and some strong punches. Best Line - Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson... My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'... Worst Line - I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds... Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red... Talon - Your rhymes didnt work, flow was ok, punches didnt make sence. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I am voting for NotoriousM becuase he had the stronger punches, and the better flow. Talon you flowed ok, but your punches didnt work. Vote - NotoriousM Return The Fav. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for talon
wow, how did notorious get a vote?................
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bump this..............................................
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Voted For: talon
notorious had weak similies and metas.. some shit was just statements honestly big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer talon didn't have many punches. but enough to get him the win. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216845 |
upping............................................
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bump this..........................................
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Voted For: talon
Talon won this one, it was a pretty good battle, but the boo'ze alcohol thing just won me over, good shit from both, but that's what made talons stand out. |
Voted For: talon
talon got this....... i couldn't find any good punches in M's |
Voted For: talon
big spender, about to buy the farm...here comes the plow shit, your shit gets more boo'ze, than alcoholic crowds Pretty cool talon kills bitches, i dont care if you're strong, im stronger get your rectangled with me....wont be a'round here much longer Not bad concept, weak wording, ok line this may just be a key, but my words open doors he's still in the closet....locked away in his drawers Nah smack this fool with capitols, knocking him backwards, take a peek just look at NM, his progression only leads him to an L, see? Nah i laugh at his gay name, and doesn't make sense, i might add well, if notorious is as whack as his rep, then yeh, the dude is bad Nah I'm like and eagle the was I rip your ass to shreds... Brah, my name should be talon, ima make you bleed red... Nah, too simple While i'm takin' shots at ya head, you just sittin' there jerkin' off... This battle was over before it started, I'm the one u see merkin' slobs... No Ima knock you out, the way lennox lewis did lil' mikey tyson... My Lyrics are like a straight jacket, there ain't no point in fightin'... Poor concept Your raps are weak, no flow, Mine keep comin', there instantanious... There ain't no denying it, your a lil' punk bitch, your raps are heinous... Nah Your Gettin' fucked like an anus, Homie that ain't the way you get layed... You Like a Fucken Gameboy G, The way ur fucken ass get played... Really played concept talon got this pretty easily, his opening two bars were decent. v/ Talon Drop a vote on this please: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=212893 |
go talon, go......................................
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