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Fucka Young Snowman
I'd start off by callin' you whack but thats to much of a compliment...
When I called Young Snowman' out he got offline kid just circumvents... Takin' down this young jeezy wannabe is easy like I was constabulary... Say Mim is smart for sayin irrelevent you just got a weak vocabulary... Snow your out of the ordinary becuz you got three balls to proclaim...* Young is new to RV but your already about to be on the wall of shame... I guess you can call it game because everyone is already hatin' you... Sendin' you to the devil snowmans skill level is low like satan foo'... Snowman your lyrics got RapVerse snorin' more G then a borin' story... Claimin' you were "specifyin one type" you fall under that category... Try to spit fire havin' no skill is holdin' ya back like a seat belt... I easily melt this snowman thowin' you around like cards bein' dealt... It aint' hard not to feal snow bein' cold like this kid was a ghost... Only place your posts will take you is to 'mental funk' at the most... Young my advice is to go learn graphics ya cant make any text rhyme... Snow's best line would be made up like sayin' 50 got a sex toy line... go here if you dont understand personals: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...87&page=1&pp=15 *-Snowmen are made with 3 snowballs. |
FEEDBACK time, I will return the fav.
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NO FEEDACK?.. everyone like Young Snowman or something?..
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yo GKillaz ............. lovin the verse if only u were to battle this kid , u would win clearly eh dude........................ welll nicce job , great punches ......... u killed it... GK
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That verse was alright...not much, but nice
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Thanks for the Feed, UPPIN' for more.
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I'd start off by callin' you whack but thats to much of a compliment...
When I called Young Snowman' out he got offline kid just circumvents... ^^rhyme seemed forced,1st line was cheesy..punch was,mediocre Takin' down this young jeezy wannabe is easy like I was constabulary... Say Mim is smart for sayin irrelevent you just got a weak vocabulary... ^^Good punch,but 1st line sucked,and it was waaaay out of place.Your set-ups need to be relevant to the punch.Your just saying shit because it rhymes. Snow your out of the ordinary becuz you got three balls to proclaim...* Young is new to RV but your already about to be on the wall of shame... ^^Well,wording sucked,sucked really bad.1st line was garbage,honestly. I guess you can call it game because everyone is already hatin' you... Sendin' you to the devil snowmans skill level is low like satan foo'... ^^Foo'?..wtf,that sounds dumb.And the concept of low/satan has been done a lot before,and the other ones i saw were way better than this. Snowman your lyrics got RapVerse snorin' more G then a borin' story... Claimin' you were "specifyin one type" you fall under that category... ^^Again,your set-ups are irrevevant to the punch.Your just saying shit,it sounds cheesy, Try to spit fire havin' no skill is holdin' ya back like a seat belt... I easily melt this snowman thowin' you around like cards bein' dealt... ^^Played. It aint' hard not to feal snow bein' cold like this kid was a ghost... Only place your posts will take you is to 'mental funk' at the most... ^^WTF.... Young my advice is to go learn graphics ya cant make any text rhyme... Snow's best line would be made up like sayin' 50 got a sex toy line... ^^Your best punch,but wording sucked. Ok,you bassically cannot word a punch for shit.You are horrendous at it.YOur set-ups need to ve relevant to the punch.And also,your WHOLE FUCKING VERSE WAS STRETCHED OUT.NO FLOW AT IN ALL IN THIS VERSE. You need work. |
:love:^, first time i seen decent feed in a OM for a while,
hit me up n msn fuk: dannydaubney@hotmail.com. And who the fuck is young snowman. |
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was aight, ya battles r better and it seemed like the metaphors were just being put in for fun and the punches wasnt aimed properly. The punches need to be more direct and hit a lot harder in my opinion. If you wanna battle hit me up |
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