New "Doc" Trin- Fire Man (WIlla Peer Diss)
 

She thought i wouldnt diss her so i did. Enjoy.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3162684

Oh i smoked a lot of marajuna and liquor when i recorded this. I also was on crack.

ur in cs but ur dissing the leader...hmm

aight peepin

Production: Of course its nice:9/10

Flow:ok...lets hear...your flow is kinda basic not too bad tho:7.5/10

Emotion:Ya emotion wasn't that great sounded like u just read it off the paper:6.5/10

Pressense:Man you gotta up it but its aight not too bad.....you dont sound like u mean what u sayin:7/10

Lyrics:Not very good punchlines..wasn't very good....kinda bland:6/10

Overall:this is wasn't a very good diss man u better up ya game or redo it cuz will will kill ya...:6.5/10

keep um coming keep droppin no hate

~1

Its not like a beef diss... because of course i wouldnt diss the leader of my crew... its kind of a inside joke thing.... but if she responds which id like to see.. it be kinda funny, cause i want to see her "kill me" and i dont battle rap... this is only my second time..

and u gotta remeber its audio... no one does what they do on text on to audio... aduio is always dumbed down... take piggy bank for example... that was a horrible diss... but maybe if 50 cent belonged to this forum and put it in the open mic... it wouldve been a lot better.

yeah true.....i thought u were for real tho

hahahahah CUT...

LMFAO LMFAO

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LOL well i guess thats what i get.. lol... i aint no mark though.. i dont back down.. well back to rap battles LOL... peace yalll

lol, she hoe'd yo dumbass

Will all passengers proceed off willas penis, thank you.

lol i was joking he knows it we were fucking on aim and he said eh would and i was liek yea ok(cause he never drops anything) so im proud that u dropped something lol
beat is dope of course
intro idk lol you remind me of a hick when you talk lol i can jsut picture you damn willlyyyyyy go milk the cow lol
1st bar dont breath in so heavy when you start lol no ones really hear of you lol but i have i luv you no personal
2nd bar lol at scurred to get the flow nicer lol at uncle tom meh didnt hit though
3rd bar flow sounds kind of rushed cant hear most of the first line
4th lol at leaving with no tips didnt hit though
5th crack rock played dont know how u got im tom boy lol
6th trailer park no far from it lol played
7th mad played at barbie diary
7th wack no comment probably one of the3 worst
8th lol i do squirt but u ooze lol
ok chorus you should have tweeked it a little at least but work on the emotion you lacked the most on that breath control you sound like ur out of breath lol
1stummm no lol another really bad one
2nd flow sounded weird on this line herpes blister wack lol
3rd this was ur best line so far ppl did think i sounded like a little boy on the mic at first till i worked with it and improved it best line in the whole song
4th my names amanda what does that mean lol
5th flow wasnt that good on this line
6th wackest 1st line but the follower was dope
7th no hit
8th flow was kind of off bad closer
chorus sound off beat like u pasted it off a little bit?
OVERALL I HEARD 2 NICE LINES LOL WEERD EMOTION NEEDS TO BE UPPED SOME PARTS HAD BAD PRONUNCIATIONS BUT MOST WERE GOOD FLOW WAS PRETTY COOL FOR THE MOST PART OFF IN LIEK 4 PLACES
EMOTION AND PERSONALS WERE WHERE YOU LACKED PUT A SOCK OVER UR MIC LOL IT WILL HELP ADD DUBS NEXT TIME AND I WOULD HAVE ADDED AN INTRO

past tense wheres my bg foooooooooo????

LOL........... damn its not that bad lol

i never siad it was bad lol stop assuming shit..........
well i guess i should respond ill do it tommorow i guess

man i knew i shoulda used this beat like 3 months ago..... back wen people didnt even knew this song existed...... now if i do it, ima look like everyone else

anyways...... u got some pretty good flow, altho nuthin amazin, but u never fall off, but im not feelin sum of these punches, kinda commercial punches...... some of its good lyrical tho, but alil commercial, altho its hard to not make a commercial battle track, lol...... aight quality compared to most people

put some emotion in this man..... ur flow and presence is aight, but u needa have some emotion in this..... sounds like ur a couple steps away from whisperin

decent track