Intermental - The Time Is Now (my best)
 

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"THE TIME IS NOW"

I THink its my best, what yall think...leave feed ill rtf...im jus gettin links now....

Whoa!!! dam man i'm amzed at the lyrical content and the end product of the song. This song is defiantely your best, it was nearly perfect in every way. Emotion was dope, flow was on point, and pressence was good. The hook was nice fiited well with the song. The outro was also good the way it just stopped that was nice.

Overall 9.4/10

Dope track man, keep it up.

thanks alot dawg....

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...851#post2562851

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216140

1st...I wouldn't say you have the best voice on RV, but you certainly have one of, if not the most distinctive soundin' voice on RV. And, as you get older and your style ripens, you'll learn to fully use your voice/delivery in your songs to your advantage.


For now, your delivery isn't bad. In fact, I think you really adapt your delivery to whatever beat your on. I think your weak area is your flow, if there is a weak area. It's normally solid and on point. It just falters every now and then and lacks variety at times. In other words, your flow is good but inconsistent right now. Again, that'll improve with experience.


THis track was pretty good though dawg...

stay up


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thanks.............

Checkin

Beats Nice...

You Come On...Flows Nice...Emotions Dope

Wow@The Lyrics Damn They Dope,Real Deep,I Feel these Lyrics Most Of You've Done

Word To Relaxin N Sittin On Moon Lol :)

Hooks Dope,....Like The Effect On Ur Voice

Aight Second Verse

The Lyrics Are Fire...Again

Hmm....

Yeah I Think You Reached/Reachin the Point(You Know What I Mean)

well Your Flow Dont Fall Off,Deliverys Nice,Emotions Good

Presence Is Nice As Hell,Its lIke Fits The Beat Perfect

Overall:9/10

Keep Up Homie


Rtf:"Wanna B.Daniel"

Comiin UpSoon ;)

thanks dawg imma peeep when up