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Y’all cant match my talent like they was fuckin’ finger prints
My rhymes contain knowledge yours is full of ignorance/
I tell ya about my life of sin you try to hide ya innocence
Right Now Ya Thinkin My Bars'll never be good as militants/
Ya Cryin For Mercy beggin’ for me to drop this rap shit
I wont, I got it mastered, bastered every lines a classic/
Ya wanna challenge my art then you gonna need practice
Plan ya tactics ya need to make ya rhymes attractive/
Come at me lyrically so i take you seriously and respond
Just know you gonna lose dude cause u ain’t on the level I’m on/
Cause I know and understand how to handle my bars like BMX
From day one i knew it was my fate to be the best/

You could have left this bar home:

"Ya Cryin For Mercy beggin’ for me to drop this rap shit"

Nice line... I liked it

"Come at me lyrically so i take you seriously and respond
Just know you gonna lose dude cause u ain’t on the level I’m on/"

8.5/10

thanks for the feed back man

pretty basic rhyme.

good flow n shit...overall 6/10

keep up the vocab. up ya shit a bit...

its dope wow at the lil rhymin scheme u got goin on...but make sure ta not just have rhymin words at the end...make sure ta have another set of rhymin words inbetween then anotha set of rhymin words at the end the more diffrent sets of rhymes u put in one line the more impressive it gets...oh by the way this alpha assassin but nos banned me from the fuckin site so i had ta get a diff account...anyway ima give ur shit a 7.5/10, not cuz it was wack but cuz there wasnt that much ta read and like i said u were just rhymin words at the end..otherwise not bad