Doubt it vs Sobe.
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding

50 posts to vote.. Just cuz

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-04-05 at 11:38 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Sobe. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-05 11:09 PM.

Doubt it has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-04-05 11:12 PM.

like a buthcher i handle beef, think you can handle me,
until my boy hand me the heat, like sand in ya crack when you sittin at the beach, ima get in ya ass taste that defeat, n it dont taste sweet like pussy do,
leave you wetted n leakin like pussy do, u a fag leave you in a bag like lunch for schoo, sobe it u goin 0-1
when we through.

i dropped this verse quick i fucked up 2 thought it was 6 lines oh well

wtf.. just post 6 lines

I have no clue who you are lmao..

.. really kid, that says it all, this bitch is mine
& it's obvious he's a newbie.. when he can barely write 6 lines
ya got a lotta problems, n' i'll put ya in a land of mess
cuz I'm leavin u homeless.. n' that's an issue u can't address
I'm the type to give hope, but still got'em fuckin scared
cuz when I raise doubt, it's only to toss him in the air

Voted For: Sobe.

Sobe - iight spit, your flow was iight, and you had some ok punches.

Best Line - .. really kid, that says it all, this bitch is mine
& it's obvious he's a newbie.. when he can barely write 6 lines

Worst Line - I'm the type to give hope, but still got'em fuckin scared
cuz when I raise doubt, it's only to toss him in the air

Doubt It - WHACK, no Flow, Punches, Wordplay, ANYTHING!

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - ALL

OVERALL - This was a weak battle, Sobe gets the vote because he had a better flow, punchlines, and rhymes. Doubt you need to flow better, up your vocab.

Vote - Sobe.

RTF or Vote will be Removed!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277

^ I don't have 100 posts.. you made it that count to vote sorry

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Voted For: Sobe.

er, i feel like i really shouldnt be explaining my vote but i will anyway.

No Doubt, you need to look at some other battles and look at how other people word their punches, fix their flow, and structure their work. I saw no obvious punches here, no metaphors or wordplay of any kind, nothing that really even dissed sobe.

Sobe, nice verse, three good punches with good wordplay and metaphors, structure was cool but it didnt take a lot to be better than the other

rtf pls in one of my battles. -preferrably the one against gkillaz05

Up, I'll hit links up when I have enough posts.

Voted For: Sobe.

like a buthcher i handle beef, think you can handle me,
until my boy hand me the heat, like sand in ya crack when you sittin at the beach,
...Butcher/beef shit is played;And in all of this,I have yet to see one punch.
ima get in ya ass taste that defeat, n it dont taste sweet like pussy do,
leave you wetted n leakin like pussy do, u a fag leave you in a bag like lunch for schoo, sobe it u goin 0-1
when we through.
...Well,a lot of filler,kinda weakened it.But the pussy thing was ok.

.. really kid, that says it all, this bitch is mine
& it's obvious he's a newbie.. when he can barely write 6 lines
...Decent
ya got a lotta problems, n' i'll put ya in a land of mess
cuz I'm leavin u homeless.. n' that's an issue u can't address
...Dope;liked the rhyming,
I'm the type to give hope, but still got'em fuckin scared
cuz when I raise doubt, it's only to toss him in the air
...Good

One-sided as fuck here.
Sobe got this easy..
Doubt it,for starters..you seem to be focusing too much on rhyming/flow..and almost neglecting punchlines.Out of all the shit you had,the one diss you had was calling him pussy..and that was weakened,becuz you mad filler around it.

Vote-Sobe.

Drop an honest vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212726

coo. up . . . .

Sobe. You had 10Mins to vote on one of my battles of I am gettin' my vote DQ'd. Im sick of people not votin'! Only one you got enough posts for is the Tie-D one.