{{this Is Life}} Pouring Out My Heart Ya'll.~~
 

Wassup ya'll...

i'm new too this recording thing...been flowing for about 2-3months now but been writing for a little longer
just finished a track..called 'This is life'...i'm just flowing to Beanie siegals 'cant go on this way'....

listen to it and give some feedback....much appriciated~~~

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=425723


This Is Life

word life, i've seen better days
been hustlin' for better ways
cream and this paper chase
21 years gone right thru' me still lost caught in this maze
still negative thoughts to call it a day
but still, pray to stay afloat
but still fall weaker
never stand tall, never speak up
its looking bleak cuzz cuzz cuzz~~~~~jeea

Early visions of my life
motion clips cut like incision
blurry picture, somethings missing
listen, picture life with no stress, no drama
scripts that arent written, sittin
spittin all day, getting all grey
betting my life on it
whatever the price
even Christ on it, throw dice
gamble with my life
cuz this aint paradise to me jeea....

Searching thru' the life purpose
the light shine bright on a wet surface
i might notice,
a reflection of myself
invection at itself
stressing as the Henny sets in
minds comtemplatin'
anguish times, raps hesitatin'
feeling like my soul levitating
out of control, swerving
drunk thoughts got me cursing
a mind of a hustler, puttin work in
puttin words together
its now or never
chasing for that green paper
supreme cream,
time to get that cake up
fake love, fake wassups
wanna luck up and shine like Jacob
i got boys tokin haze 24/7
blaze heavy gettin high like the heavens
getting by with no thoughts, no remorse
of course
ya'll my mans from the heart
but some shit i just dont endorse
i dwell in it
life's a trap that i fell in it
trynna excel but just hell wit' it
cradle to the grave wit' it
braveheart till i'm rest in peace wit' it
i'mma beast wit' it
i've seen the light
the cream the life, seems so nice
been thru' strife
prevail whatever the price
no dice games on blocks
no glocks, strains or cops
i'm hot, reign on top
sustain LO dont stop....

uppin;;;;;;;;;;

whats the point of postin "audio" in the thread title when you posted this in the songs forum?
lmao

why...u mad? lol smh...

feedback please ya'll;;;

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if I was mad, I wouldn't have put "lmao", genius

lol..come on man..this shit is childs play b..i aint trynna argue like that thru' the net..
i wont put 'audio' on here again....cool? lol

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Come On!!!!! Lol