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BigTony.Self 12-09-05 12:46 PM

Smoke to this(grab that blunt and enjoy)
 
real chill shit good beat a car thumper for all with a system............."SMOKE TO THIS"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216267
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216018

L.E 12-09-05 12:56 PM

Listening...

Beat is pretty cool...

Flow is nice...seems sorda choppy in places...:(...but it's still coo. Quality is cool. Lyrics are dope...good delivery.

Dope track. Keep it up.

BigTony.Self 12-09-05 12:58 PM

^^^appreciated...........

TitoBronsky 12-09-05 01:01 PM

Beat: dreamy... like... straight up THC crystals... fiya..

Verses: I like the way you attacked the beat... stayed on it and didnt slip.. rode it nicely.. Deff could Smoke to this... You came wit a diff style... but it matched the beat... refreshin one time for the boards...

Hook: haha... that screwed style is whats realy good .... that was hot.. and its catchy mayne.. on the real..

Production: prolly one of the best ive heard.... pretty crisp....


keep that fiya comin mayne




GOOD LOOKIN ON THE SHOUT OUT GANGSTA

Jae Gutta 12-09-05 01:19 PM

iight - to start off beat is cool, nice selection for a track like this.

Flow: good, coulda been better. Broke pattern a couple times in some akward places. Overall nice flow

Delivery: nice, once again I think if you added feeling to emphasize in some places it woulda given the track an extra boost.

Mic Presence: You got that on lock fam.

Hook: The screwed shit sounds hot on this beat so good choice.

Lyrics: Strong for the type of track it is.

Overall: Good shit man, like I said you broke flow in some difficult places that's about it. And Coulda did a lil more delivery wise. Good job tho fam

BigTony.Self 12-09-05 01:32 PM

thanks...got that rtf right now playa

BigTony.Self 12-09-05 07:32 PM

thx 4 th feedback mayne ....back up

Tha Q. 12-09-05 08:13 PM

I don't smoke...but, I'll listen to your track


I still love your voice...unmistakeable


I'm also likin the lowering of the pitch (screwed/chopped) w/e on the hook


ur flow is solid on this


u got a black man's soul brotha!



now, all you need to do is trade in that Town Car for a Bro Ham!


good track

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Ebircs 12-09-05 08:32 PM

beat is ok...

u come in ok..ur voice is decent..flow is on point..laid back shit..lyrics seem basic ATM...some ryda shit to get hight to..nice drop bro


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