Smoke to this(grab that blunt and enjoy)
real chill shit good beat a car thumper for all with a system............."SMOKE TO THIS"
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Listening...
Beat is pretty cool... Flow is nice...seems sorda choppy in places...:(...but it's still coo. Quality is cool. Lyrics are dope...good delivery. Dope track. Keep it up. |
^^^appreciated...........
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Beat: dreamy... like... straight up THC crystals... fiya..
Verses: I like the way you attacked the beat... stayed on it and didnt slip.. rode it nicely.. Deff could Smoke to this... You came wit a diff style... but it matched the beat... refreshin one time for the boards... Hook: haha... that screwed style is whats realy good .... that was hot.. and its catchy mayne.. on the real.. Production: prolly one of the best ive heard.... pretty crisp.... keep that fiya comin mayne GOOD LOOKIN ON THE SHOUT OUT GANGSTA |
iight - to start off beat is cool, nice selection for a track like this.
Flow: good, coulda been better. Broke pattern a couple times in some akward places. Overall nice flow Delivery: nice, once again I think if you added feeling to emphasize in some places it woulda given the track an extra boost. Mic Presence: You got that on lock fam. Hook: The screwed shit sounds hot on this beat so good choice. Lyrics: Strong for the type of track it is. Overall: Good shit man, like I said you broke flow in some difficult places that's about it. And Coulda did a lil more delivery wise. Good job tho fam |
thanks...got that rtf right now playa
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thx 4 th feedback mayne ....back up
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I don't smoke...but, I'll listen to your track
I still love your voice...unmistakeable I'm also likin the lowering of the pitch (screwed/chopped) w/e on the hook ur flow is solid on this u got a black man's soul brotha! now, all you need to do is trade in that Town Car for a Bro Ham! good track 1 |
beat is ok...
u come in ok..ur voice is decent..flow is on point..laid back shit..lyrics seem basic ATM...some ryda shit to get hight to..nice drop bro |
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