Somewhere in the Air feat. Ysdat
 

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...74&page=1&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216565

Collab between me and Ysdat bout losing someone.

My verses are free'd with a "I cant be fucked with this low quality" attitude. :)

^stop making excuses for your wackness yswack. Revs sendin me the track now.

just so people relise ( for those who im'd me) I freestyle first, rev drops his written second.
Last verse is a short free from me the revs last spit.

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yo ysdat, hus that chick in ya sig?????? lol

Thanks for the feed. :rolleyes:

ahh yer your track! lol

listenin....
1st guy (ysdat i think)-quality aint too bad, could be improved alot though, flow was on and off, emotion was good, multis were pretty dope...

2nd guy (rev)-damn, i can hardly hear you at all! lol, you need to change that big time. cant leave feed cause i couldnt hear anythin you were sayin in this verse lol

3rd verse-good flow ysdat, not bad for a free. rev, i can hear you abit better now lol. not too bad, flow was alrite, went off at times, emotion was good.

overall-a good collab, but it was faulted by bad quality, and you both needed to have a more consistent flow

Thanks..do you know how to up the sound? I have the mic up as loud as it will go.

ysdat I believe you we're first cuz your bad quality and shit. your lyrics were fa sho very good and you said this was a free so damn pretty good. flow and delivery wasn't to bad, but could use work. your a lot like a robot lol you dont say it like you mean it, get furious and spit man. rev man I say anything cuz I couldn't hear you one bit, i could lightly hear your voice behind the beat but man turn the volume up man, no one can hear you lol.

can y'all rtf on "Smile For Me"

peace