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Bonafide 12-10-05 10:06 PM

Shadows
 
Shadows

Still i rise through my pain which is filled with lies
hearin many cries it hurts like the place is built with knives
as i approach the scene i see blood so i encroach
to expand my means i feel no command so it seems
the place is runnin wild with absent faces gunnin
just shadows of souls killin for fun and thier cunnin
evadin the searches fadin into darkness raidin the churches
to steal innocent spirits so they can lay 'em in herses
bringin many tears to eyes makin u fear to despise
they leave u searin for years no where to run no where to hide
try not to let it ride u need to fight back to bring light back
cuz they bask in darkness show 'em light and thier sight lacks
blinded by the day they're reminded of the good days
keep in mind that they can come back in anyway
so keep ur head up and have a positive soul stand straight up
even if u old rock the jewlery even roll in a hooptie straight up
dont let shit get u down then they wont come around
just hit it around keepin them in disbelief u wont be found

short and simple, keepin it nice. :thumbup:

Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2571125

Nick Knack 12-11-05 12:28 AM

pretty good homie. flow waz good the whole way through. vocab was aight, bit too simple at timez though. overall it is a good drop. 7/10


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