A Quick Spit To See If Im Nice...
 

I Posted Dis On Another Site To...Jus To Let Yall Kno...

All Yall Kno Dat My "Mind-Defines-Complex-ity",Dats Da Reason Why Ders Alwayz "Fine-Dymes-Next-To-Me"//
Yes,Stephz "Line-Rhymez-Wrecks-Theses-Frees",But Yall Like Some Dumb "Blind-Kinds,...Rejects-To-See"//
Im Also Top-Notch,Ya "Gang-Shoot-Me-Back"? ,Na,Im A Hot-Shot, I Got-Props, Ill Show Ya "Brain-To-The-Facts" //
But Des "Lame-Newbies-Act" ,Like Ano-rexics,Becuause In Yall Hand-Wrote-Text-Spits Yall "Claim-To-Be-Phat" //
But Des Emcees "Tapes-Out-Has-Muting-Bars", I Dont-Hear-Yall,And I Wont-Fear-Yall "Fakes-Out,-Who-Be-Par"* //
But My Fans "Break-Out-Routing Hard" ,Im Grubbing-Homies And Like Subing-Kobe Ill "Take-Out-Ya-Shooting-Guard!" //
Yes Im Stealing-Da-Show,"Wow!Thief-Cheat-Cable"!But No1 Is Feelin-Des-Hoes,Admin Y Yall "Allow-Des-Street-Fables"? //
Got Rejectable-Hammers, My "Loud-Team's-Feets-Stable",Yea,Were Like Vegatable-Scanners,How-We-"Beet-Labels"** //
Da "Skills-Choosen",2 Land-On-Me, Cuz Im Da Man-On-Frees,Its My Plan-To-Be On Da Nice "Wheels,-Crusien"//
Make Ya "Feel-Amusing" Den Ill Let Ya Best-Man-2-See,Facen Me Is Like Ya Next-Fanasty,Yall See Da "Ill-Losen"(Illusion) //


*-Par Means Average
**-Beat Labels(Record Labels) Beets A Vegatable,Scanners Are Labels
***An Illusion Is A Fanasty




appreciate all who dat read...thank u muah fuca'z!

Arghhhhhhhhhhhh...


...my Fuckin Eyes!

lol^^ does that means it sucks?? lmao i dunno...

I couldnt bare to read it.

Just fix your structure, we dont have that shitty style here.

i cant really fix my structure up no more because of how long my multies are...unless i put a multie at every line which doesnt really flow together...

All Yall Kno Dat My "Mind-Defines-Complex-ity",Dats Da Reason Why Ders Alwayz "Fine-Dymes-Next-To-Me"//
Yes,Stephz "Line-Rhymez-Wrecks-Theses-Frees",But Yall Like Some Dumb "Blind-Kinds,...Rejects-To-See"//

At least change it to:

My mind defines compexity, so theres always fine dimes next to me
Stephs line rhymes wreck these frees but your dumb blinds kinds..rejects to see

Damn. Whats up folk, I didnt know you can spit dat good. I thought me and Coung was da only one's droppin at South. Anyways just try and do what my homie Daubs said and you will be straight her. Just dont highlight ya punches and rhymes. I spot cha later folk.

~1~

lmfao Daubs is right im gon need lazer eye surgery after readin this shit...but ur ight..u gotta stop forcin u were focusin on makin it complex too hard to the point where it didnt really make that much sense..."Yes,Stephz "Line-Rhymez-Wrecks-Theses-Frees",But Yall Like Some Dumb "Blind-Kinds,...Rejects-To-See"//"
lol that proves my point...just work on ur storytellin and drop that bold unbold shit u got on...lol thats a lil annoying...but overall not too bad for bein only ur 3rd post

iite...im a stop dat...i dont kno how yall be spitten cuz i been on so many sites and der different such as...

Sixshot(check me out der...x9xstephanx22x)hollafront,goldmic,rapcapital ,hiphopfoundary,hiphopemccees,rapbattles,rhymecrim ez...

lol as u can see, i rap alot...good lookin on da feed tho...ez