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noname 12-13-05 04:32 PM

MaRVOLOUSJay vs Natural killa
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d.r

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 12-16-05 at 04:32 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

MaRVJay 12-13-05 06:57 PM

check da fukk in nigga

System 12-13-05 06:58 PM

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 06:58 PM.

System 12-13-05 07:01 PM

MaRVOLOUSJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-13-05 07:01 PM.

noname 12-13-05 07:22 PM

I'll own you in this,bitch,with shit that'll hurt you,and-
-Get you mad,dog...so you'll remember how he merked your ass
Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis
Alone,ur toasted,& no one likes you,u must regret u fell in this
Cause your fuckin' rhymes are about as bad..as your spelling is
I'll tell-ya',bitch..your wack,so bad you outta atone
& You linger in the air..like some cheap-ass colonge
Let it be known,it's over,how do you even manage in these times?
I mean,c'mon..you lost to King solo.........three times

MaRVJay 12-14-05 06:30 PM

wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.
compare 2 me dis guy think's he sicka,vets u beat? i'll say 3 niggaz.
ur a weak spitta...and your losin here i thought u was a G-KiLLa?
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
i see ya bar's are still noobish u need help?..boy holla.
cuzz dogg only time we'll 'hearin ya single' u 'drop'd a coin dollar'.
a hott verse from u i havent seen,fukk ya PLL magazine.
dis 'cross dressin' nigga a get his 'drag' thru 'queens'.

dont gte nothin dont vote!.

GKillaz05 12-14-05 06:53 PM

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

Natural killa - You had a weak flow, punches where hitten hard and some good connecting multi's.

Best Line - Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis

Worst Line - I'll own you in this,bitch,with shit that'll hurt you,and-
-Get you mad,dog...so you'll remember how he merked your ass

MarvJay - You had a good flow, wordplay was good, punches where hitten hard, good personals.

Best Line - wait ya'll tellin me macreep aka k trini..finally got vet fame??.
nah! kid's a fag u can catch 'in-male'*mail* like his 'check came'.

Worst Line - lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.

OVERALL - This was a close battle, Natural came with some good multi's, ok wordplay, and his punches where hitten. Marv came with a solid flow, and he had good personals, and punches. I give my vote to Marv because he had good wordplay, and better flow and punches. NK your flow was off.

Vote - MaRVOLOUSJay

RTF in SIG on NK Battle!

IXX 9 Tenths XXI 12-14-05 07:55 PM

This was feedback posted for MaRVOLOUSJay
 
Dope battle. Nice on both parts. I cant vote tho. But this was a dope battle.

noname 12-15-05 02:09 PM

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noname 12-17-05 08:28 AM

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Sobe. 12-17-05 11:45 AM

Voted For: Natural killa

Can't hurt to ask,but how can you stay cold,and boast it?
cuz ur style is brittle,like bones with osteoporosis
I'll tell-ya',bitch..your wack,so bad you outta atone
& You linger in the air..like some cheap-ass colonge

nk also had a personal in his last bar.. it just didn't hit that hard.

uuggg.. marvolous started out with played wordplay.
lyrically he's beyond me?,yea rite & his moms look like beyonce.
natural killa like the clothing store in nyc..cuzz he D-R-JAY.
^^^^forced to hell.

marvolous just tries to hard.. he has week concepts and their usually played

v/ nk

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

%%%% 12-17-05 11:30 PM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
uppin.............................................

noname 12-18-05 11:53 AM

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noname 12-19-05 01:16 PM

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noname 12-20-05 12:23 PM

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