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Jae Gutta 12-14-05 04:07 PM

Can I Get With U
 
Fire single material. I'm signed as most of you know so I have to do a lot of things that wasn't normally me when i was just here before the deal. but let me know what's good on this joint.

www.soundclick.com/princeofthecity

replied to 3TE's joint and Intermental's joint

PrahJect 12-14-05 04:14 PM

Listnein, flow is hot, you work with the beat real nice, u have a certain harmony when u rap aswell lol which is great, ure flow is basically flawless...
presence is hot, u have a certain presence that when people hear can identify it with you, delivery is nice too...you can make our everything youre saying fine, emotion is nice on this you can tell this is from the heart and it is evident the way you say thangs..hook is dope i rlly like the panned effects, good mixin...this track is def summin I can hear on the radio/ see on the tv..def a hit...grreat joint..9/10...pz

Tha Q. 12-14-05 04:28 PM

Jae...wut kinda mic do u use?...the quality is acceptable, but isn't as crisp as it could be...not bad tho

I liked the beat...but the singing sample in the background could have been a little lower in the verse


I love the hook...best part of the song


flow is good...all the basics are there


good joint


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Blay'all 12-14-05 04:31 PM

J-Gutta is a cat in S.Q.A.D. is he not?
or is he on Young Money now?

Jae Gutta 12-14-05 04:37 PM

nah my stage name is not Jae Gutta my name is Young Gutta or Gutta. Jae Gutta is a name i chose for RV. Cause my real name is Jae

L.E 12-14-05 05:49 PM

Listening...

Beat is cool...felling the concept of the song so far.

Great flow, quality is lacking...but that doesnt matter. Great lyrics, great delivery, the hook is dope as hell. Great track man, keep it up.

Paranoid 12-14-05 10:57 PM

not bad I've heard a few of your tracks, I like your voice a lot. deep and shit I like that. beats pretty dope fa sho, concept and lyrics is pretty good nice and smooth flow with a pretty decent delivery. quality aint bad, could use some work. but overall ima give you props for this track. dopeness. your quality aint bad and I take it your puttin most of them tracks on ya s/c onto a new album or somin, quality won't affect that man dope job. make some cash.

rtf: Smile For Me

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Jae Gutta 12-15-05 05:55 AM

werd - thanx for the feed. Like I said in the main post this is probably a single, but thanks for the opinion

Past Tense 12-15-05 10:35 AM

aight listenin now..i lovve that beat i am gonna use it 2 :).....ur quality is ur only flow...if you had better flow yuo'd be a real nice cat serioiusly....ur flow is dope...and u sound like sheek louch....for real u and di game should do a redo of A D Block song that'd be classic lmao...but shit..this aint too bad fam..somthing i'd def. bump which is saying a lot.....u def. an elite head....just i dont like ya adlibs on ur hook....keep droppin tho def. good.. 8.5/10

Jae Gutta 12-15-05 01:02 PM

lol, I didn't get that if my flow was better I'd be real nice? or quality is my only flaw? And I didn't adlib the hook at all. Onlly adlibs came on the verses and the bridge. I did the hook along with the sample and added one line..lol, thanks for the feed. Appreciate it

Past Tense 12-15-05 01:13 PM

well idk it was after the first verse but ur flow was good just quality was lackin

Phase.One 12-15-05 01:13 PM

flow is real sick im fucking wit it nice rounded track overall

Jae Gutta 12-15-05 11:42 PM

thanks fam, thanks for the love everyone


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