Trip Droppin That Real Shit Once Again>>>peep It!!!!!
 

yea whaddup yall....this is a real song talking bout life....so peep it...give me good detailed feed....much appreciated....1



Song Title: I Got Dreams

Link to song:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=185998


Links to feed left:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2577091
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2577098
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217201

beat is cool drums are like non existan lol
flow is cool you switched it up alot alot of multis was pretty cool i liked it
lyrics were real deep youre letting us get to know ur life was good i like the first verse the ebest the the outro speech was nice not the best ive heard from you but it was depep cool track

Listening...

Beat sounds deep...good shit...

Flow is dope...lyrics are deep as hell...good shit.

Quality is great as usual...

Great stuff. Keep it up man, for sure.

yo u really startin ta get inta these slow songs first close my eyes.now its this but werd this shit is defitnly dope..of course ur quality is dope...yo u speakin ta everyone on this shit..good job :thumbup: i dont even think the flow went off at all and u even switched it up a lil....i like the beat i'd probably spit to it...lol defitnly no complaints on this track...and fuck yea life IS a bitch...yo this has ta be the deepest track i seen from u and u did really good..i'd probably give this a 8.7/10....yo defitnly keep doin tracks like this :)

aight peepin now

production:you always have a good ears for beats.....this beat was reall ill:9/10

Flow:aight.....ya flow was real nice you rode the beat real well on this track:8.5/10

Emotion:ya emotion was good but if you pushed ya self a lil more it sounds kinda monotone in ya voice in some spots but overall its pretty good:7.8/10

Pressense:You reall had nice pressense on this shit......i could feel you all the way through the track:8.5/10

Lyrics:You had some solid lyrics on this felt the realness and vocab:8/10

Overall:this is problay an other song i'd burn too a cd and listen too its pretty good...your quality is real nice.....keep droppin this stuff fam:8.7/10

Keep coming fam..this ish was nice

rtf:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217203

Aight son...

Flow is dope as usal kinda slow tempo for you though nice switch up

Delivery in tha begining was different from you it was dope lovin it

Lyrics something that i cant even knock cause you can tell when someone spillin ish from they heart or not i was def feelin tha issues you was touchin on...

Overall-this was my joint son perfect track for me right now i be stressin an shit but damn prolly best track from you IMO you jus keep comin better an better every track son keep droppin =1=...

damn trip pretty good, been awhile and shit, nice lil story and I liked the way you switched the flow up and shit. beat is pretty good, that lil screem in the background is dope. voice is nice and layed back on this one, good job man. I downloaded it:thumbup:

keep droppin dopeness.

aight

Beats Dope

Dleiverys Fuckin Hot!!!!!!

emotions Koo

Your Lyrics Are Hot As Hell

The Beat Sample Is Dope

Damb Your Flow Is Flawless

How long you been Doin This ???

The Qualitys Crisp.....

Damb Seems You worked Hard On this Joint

The Outros Dope

Its A Nice Track

Proly The best I Heard On Rv In A Time

Overall:9.5/10

Keep It Up!

liking how u kinda switched the delivery for this....its fits VERY NICE with the beat and topic....

lyrics are...just....damn.....nice....

you = best flow on this site........your prolly one of the 2 or 3 on this site...than i can listen to....and not wonder off in the middle of it.....

sample in the beat is nice...and i like how its the hook for this....and like what you do with the hook...as far as the talking over the sample....BUT i would have REALLY loved to have heard a hook done by you on this....i think that coulda really set it off....

really i have no complaints with this.......*downloads*

whoaaa this is deep rite here trip

beat is dope

flow and your delivery is dope, like the way you switching ya flow up

lyrics are fire deep and revealing, got a real insight here trip

dope dope track overall - 9/10

can ya return the fav dawg on this track-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217221

appreciated

Beats top, intros cool...top voice,
lyrics seem deep, heavy flow, effects on vocals am feelin...i like how you switch the flow up inter rhyming...delivery is perfect, confidence is there and it shows. deep lyrics. 2nd verse is best imo.
Top track, 9/10.

Beats cool.. Pretty slow...
Vocals were good.. Flow all sounded tight.. Production was good..

Word @ the positive message this song is giving..... Ill shit bro...

aiiight peeping....

beat coo..... nice shit wit voice..... good flow, liking the story you telling... good shit about mcdonald's and jobs and shit.....

Like how you talked on hook wit singing on background..... feeling that dope touch....

second verse, good shit....... good multi's and good flow changes. Dope shit man. Lyrics ill.......

word hook singing is ill....

word @ always way to overcome the bullshit....... word yo.. true shit

overall, real dope song man. That real shit there. Good variety you got going in your last few songs. feeling it yo. dope shit. 9.5/10 pc one.

Uppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nn

Well,first time I'm listening to on your tracks..my feedback may be different from the rest,but w/e..take it how you want

Liked the beat and quality...But I hate your voice.It pisses me off...LoL.
But the lyrics were good..nice rhyme scheme and shit.I ain't ussually a fan of postive message,but this was ite..
Only thing is the delivery..you sound like you spitting a battle rap.U just sound agressive..and yet,you telling people to hold their head high..
it's like a bully pressing a nerd up against the wall looking like their about to steal they lunch money...but then patting then on the head telling them to stay strong..
That's what your delivery seemed like to me..

Anyways,that's my feed..