allik war vs J.Carter
 

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Check in by: 12-20-05 at 04:39 AM

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allik war has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-15-05 04:40 AM.

J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"
engulf the wordplay wit a "hex,"
dont this nigga kno i got da game by its "neck//
im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//
im here 2 murda this cat not make sumtin 4 "kids,"
ima stick 10 knives in his "ribs",jus 4 gettin in my "biz"//
im "serious",my head "delirious",jackin off 2 barely 18--- videos wit a hacksaw compared 2 me r.kelly's "hilarious//
ill punch j n hit "carter",then "clothes-line" carter n ----
punchline "j",cats like yo wtf he jus "say",u can "say" wut u want about "me",but im spell-checkin ya words like a spellin "b",man fuck this battle im up in smoke---
like dr. d-r-e!

dont take shit 2 heart nigga shit jus music go head n drop yo verse n good luck homie

J.Carter has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-19-05 06:08 AM.

Voted For: J.Carter

J.Carter - You had a good flow, you had ok punchlines, ok personals.

Best Line - How ima battle somebody tryna rhyme like Em?
even if he rapped his age he still wouldnt be a "10"

Worst Line - Glock work? lemme show you how tha clock work

allik war - Your flow was weak, your punches wernt hitten that hard.

Best Line - J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"

Worst Line - im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//

OVERALL - This was a weak battle, both need to up there game. But J gets my vote, he had the better flow, and his punches where hitten hard. War you need to work on your flow, you had alot of multi's but your punches wernt hitten very hard.

Vote - J.C

RTF in SIG or VOTE REMOVED!

i dont wanna sound like im sayin im da shit n no 1 can beat me in a battle but damn yo his verse was weak as fuck compared 2 mine....n it took his ass like 3-4 days 2 reply c'mon people ur killin me here....oh well good luck.....uppin 4 votes

Son stfu fa reelz that shit was written in like 2 mins an still came 10 x better than you 1...

This was feedback posted for allik war
 

LMAO you used your last line against me in that audio thats funny anyway checkin polls i would vote but you'd think its a hate vote J won with his first bar

Voted For: allik war

How ima battle somebody tryna rhyme like Em?
even if he rapped his age he still wouldnt be a "10"
..first line doesn't make much sense.If you referring to his sig with the rhyming like em thing,that's not actually him rhyming like em.It's him leavin feed in someone's song where THEY rhymed like em.And in the 2nd line,he's not 10.And how can you rap your age?Makes no sense.
Runnin bases on dude like canseco after juice hits
Publicly fuckin up this dude like gays in massachusetts
...Good.
Glock work? lemme show you how tha clock work
When tha hand meets needle deadly like herion addicts
...NO
Dudes a closet case suttin like mansons attic
...Gon finish that bar?

J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"
...OK,
engulf the wordplay wit a "hex,"
dont this nigga kno i got da game by its "neck//
...WHy do you keep qouting your rhyming "words".
im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//
...Decent
im here 2 murda this cat not make sumtin 4 "kids,"
ima stick 10 knives in his "ribs",jus 4 gettin in my "biz"//
...NOpe,
im "serious",my head "delirious",jackin off 2 barely 18--- videos wit a hacksaw compared 2 me r.kelly's "hilarious//
...No rhyme?,Wtf?
ill punch j n hit "carter",then "clothes-line" carter n ----
punchline "j",cats like yo wtf he jus "say",u can "say" wut u want about "me",but im spell-checkin ya words like a spellin "b",man fuck this battle im up in smoke---
like dr. d-r-e!
...FUck it..

Ok,I didn't like this battle to be honest.
J.Carter...your lines didn't make much sense.Like the tryna rhyme like em one..and the age/10 shit..

Allik war..fix ya structure up.And why do you keep doing "this" with your shit.IT's annoying.And a bunch of your shit didn't rhyme...

I'ma have to give it to Allik war..

vote-Allik War

Allik War,drop a vote on this battle below.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217090

J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"
engulf the wordplay wit a "hex,"
dont this nigga kno i got da game by its "neck//
RHYME DONT IT?


im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//
RHYMES FINE DONT IT?


im here 2 murda this cat not make sumtin 4 "kids,"
ima stick 10 knives in his "ribs",jus 4 gettin in my "biz"//
RHYME FINE DONT IT


im "serious",my head "delirious",jackin off 2 barely 18--- videos wit a hacksaw compared 2 me r.kelly's "hilarious//
RHYME FINE DONT IT

ill punch j n hit "carter",then "clothes-line" carter n ----
punchline "j",cats like yo wtf he jus "say",u can "say" wut u want about "me",but im spell-checkin ya words like a spellin "b",man fuck this battle im up in smoke---
like dr. d-r-e!

MULTI N AGAIN RHYME FINE DONT IT?

I AINT HATIN ON THE VOTE NATURAL KILLA REALLY THANX.THE WHOLE QUOTIN MY RHYMING WORDS...JUS TRYING 2 FIGURE WUT'S EASSIER 4 SUM OF OUR SLOWER CROWD ON RV SO THEY CANT SAY SHIT DIDNT EVEN RHYME FEEL ME.LEXIKON UR JUS MAD CUZ UR SHIT WAS WHACK.........N BTW J CARTER IM 21 YRS OLD NOT 10 HOMIE N DITTO ON WUT NATURAL KILLA SAID ABOUT RHYMING LIKE EM.N BESIDES UR FIRST BAR RHYMED N UR LAS 1 DID...BUT WUT ABOUT THE 3 LINES BETWEEN THEM? COULDNT FINISH UR THOUGHTS,UR KILLING ME HERE WIT RHYMES WHERE I GOTTA FILL IN THE SPOTS....LOL N E WAYS THANX N UPPIN THIS BATTLE...PEEP MY AUDIO SHIT AGAINST LEXIKON 2 IN OM UNDER DISS TRACKS..ITS IN HIS THREAD 4 ME N LUMBERJACK PEACE

yea cuz you cant say your the shit cuz your old account your record was 5-9 you got merked like the bitch you are and FUCK B.A.M.

Voted For: J.Carter

hmmm war's verse was just weak and really poorly structured... to much concentration on flow, and self glorification... not enough personals, or even loosely related punches...

Opener: JC
Closer: JC
Punches: JC
Personals: JC
Creativity: JC
Complexity: JC
Structure: JC
Enjoyment: JC

Vote: JC

Voted For: J.Carter

J.Carter
How ima battle somebody tryna rhyme like Em?
even if he rapped his age he still wouldnt be a "10"
Weak, shitty wordplay..
Runnin bases on dude like canseco after juice hits
Publicly fuckin up this dude like gays in massachusetts
Not feeling..good flow though..
Glock work? lemme show you how tha clock work
When tha hand meets needle deadly like herion addicts
Dudes a closet case suttin like mansons attic
Ouch... Weak closer man..


vs.


allik war
J.Carter "next",2 b murdered in "text,"
leave dis nigga in da past like that group "next,"
No.. bad punch..
engulf the wordplay wit a "hex,"
dont this nigga kno i got da game by its "neck//
Whack..
im out smokin j.carter when i finish his "spliff,"
diggin up corpses the only way he close 2 havin a "stiff//
Weak wordplay..
im here 2 murda this cat not make sumtin 4 "kids,"
ima stick 10 knives in his "ribs",jus 4 gettin in my "biz"//
Shitty..
im "serious",my head "delirious",jackin off 2 barely 18--- videos wit a hacksaw compared 2 me r.kelly's "hilarious//
Sooooo gay..
ill punch j n hit "carter",then "clothes-line" carter n ----
punchline "j",cats like yo wtf he jus "say",u can "say" wut u want about "me",but im spell-checkin ya words like a spellin "b",man fuck this battle im up in smoke---
like dr. d-r-e!
This just confused me..

Vote:J.Carter

Although this battle was horrible, I believe he came out on top..