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13th. 12-15-05 01:56 PM

Me Againist Everyone Ft.UNF
 
www.soundclick.com/madknight

1st verse : Me
Hook : UNF
2nd : Me
Intro and Outro : Me

My Best Yet! The Title Really Almost Describes The Track!!!! :thumbup:

13th. 12-15-05 02:00 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217211
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217199

Daubs 12-15-05 02:33 PM

Beats ill as fuck.

Decent when you kick in..you mad improved, hook works well, your flow was decent, accents clear.

Defo your best, didnt hear all of it, decent though mate, rtf when i post mine up.

B To The D 12-15-05 02:35 PM

Thx For Feed

Mad Ima Give Some Feed

Deliverys Koo
Emtoions Good
I Like Your Lyrics
Love The Hook ;)
Lol
Presence Is Nice You Sound Confident Now Before YOu Didnt

Good Track Man:)

G Deuce 12-15-05 02:36 PM

Yo, lol at the sample at the beginning.....

Hahaha, almost forgot you was from UK. Ight MK comes in, work on your delievery is very simple, which makes your rhyming very simple. Overall, ok verse, but could have been a lot better. Just need practice. Also, up your quality, cause there's too much echo, it needs to sound more natural.

Hook is ok, but doesnt have a good transition from verse to chorus.
sounds like you need to turn vocals up.

Ight, next verse. Pretty simple, same as first. Just need to up your delievery and your rhyme scheme, because its very, very simple. Overall, decent track.

7/10

PrahJect 12-15-05 02:53 PM

listenin ure accent is weird lol...but thas u..and its good u not tryna put on a voice...vocals too loud..u gotta write to the beat completely..cos ure writin and stop and rappin..but good for one of ure first tracks...quality is not bad....its kl..hook its kl...vocals gone low levels in contrast makes bad efeect...flow is acceptable mad..turn the levels down like 5 noches...lyrics are kl...but thas bout it..presence on the mic is ok..delivery isactually good..this was aiite keep up

Tha Q. 12-15-05 03:02 PM

beat: decent

Madknight: good articulation of ur words...

Delivery fit the tone of the track = good


flow was ok..lyrics...from what I heard ok


Hook...sounded noisy...tough to make out what was said...but fit the tone of the track


not a bad joint...good delivery in it

13th. 12-15-05 03:10 PM

thanx for all the feed.....*things how decent it is*

best feeds ive ever got

uppin

Daubs 12-15-05 03:14 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217234

rtf.

13th. 12-15-05 03:32 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Daubs

Done Daubs Mate:D

Paranoid 12-15-05 05:06 PM

lil better I suppose, quality is horrible though. lyrics are decent. some of your words weren't pronounced right I suggest you focuss on that, gettin the words right. the hook ima barley gonna say anything cuz I cant understand it. 2nd verse is alright not much different from the 1st.

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Sean Gunner 12-15-05 05:37 PM

Listening...

Lyrics are ok, but your flow is just ... ... ... and kinda gets boring. Your quality is much better and your delivery sounds strong. You've got the, BRING IT ON MOTHERFUCKER! sound. Good job. Overall, just work on a smoother flow.

Mentor 12-15-05 06:45 PM

listenin...the beat is decent i'd love ta spit to that shit...ahhhh an uk accent...i think i gotta get out the band aids cuz my ears is bleeding from it..lol but i aint gon try ta rip on ur accent cuz i know that ur stuck wit the accent u have and i aint tryin ta judge hip hop by how u talk...im lovin the hook..the hook is defitnly dope...ur qualitys decent it aint no studio but it aint nuthin like my old piece of shit mic niether...the flows on point....not too bad just work on a speakin a lil more clearer cuz it a lil hard ta understand wit ur accent once again i aint tryin ta rip on ur accent...ur delivery is dope u defitnly confident u dont start ta shake when ur on the mic so thats defitnly a good thang...like i said just try ta speak a lil more clear and you'll be fine...holla back at one of my later drops i'll probably drop sumthin tomorrow night or sumthin..RTF then...pc

Hoodz Prophet 12-15-05 07:10 PM

prettyy dope in my opinion...MK one of the dopest cats out the UK...period...in my opinion at least...quality not that bad hook is pretty good...lyrics are simple but so is the delivery so it makes it sound better...flow is a lot better...i hate when people talk bout the UK accent...its not that hard to understand...all you really gotta do is listen...MK when you get a better mic people will understand you better...its just it sound kinda muffled naaah meaansss...but yeah definitely good track...so keep it up hoe :thumbup:


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