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G Deuce 12-15-05 02:42 PM

Ancient Perception (Intro) - Deuce and Vox
 
Yea, this is the intro to our collab demo.

Ancient Perception (intro)
(click above)

Intro- Deuce
Verse 1 - Deuce
Chorus - Deuce
Verse 2 - Vox (also known as soul?uest)
chorus - Deuce

Mixed by - Deuce

beat - you really think i'm going to tell you.....

I left feed on MadKnight's Me against Everyone and Past Tense's Death Edge.

13th. 12-15-05 02:50 PM

Listening:

A fuking nice sample lol....flow is real real nice..... u have a real plain voice which makes it quite boring but ur presence is still there!!!

hook is nice good lyrics:D

Vox i really aint feeling..... u have no presence....... flow is aight....noooooooo emotion but you both had nice lyrics
Just keep dropping Vox u WILL get better

an decent track just a bit down hill at the end
6.5/10

Tha Q. 12-15-05 03:06 PM

heard beat before = pretty good


beat is loud, which means ur gonna have to amp ur vocals hella loud

vocals needs to be amped maybe 2 decibels

but ur flow is smooth and on beat...pretty good

lyrics...nothin too stand out-ish...not bad tho


delivery could be upped, as well as inflections in ur voice


Hook: needs to be amped...Panning the hook left and right woulda sounded tyte had I been able to hear what u were sayin


2nd cat...too much bass in his vocals...sounds like he's rappin too close to the mic

flow is pretty decent tho


not a bad track dawg, jus needs polish


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G Deuce 12-15-05 03:08 PM

thanks you too, uppin.....................

Paranoid 12-15-05 04:46 PM

I dont really like this beat, it's so old and annoying. 1st verse is pretty good flow and delivery is good. the hook is wierd and it seems off, though its decent. quest....seems to be gettin better, his mic pressence is better and so is his flow, nice lyrics and shit. overall decent track, not good enough for my list. get quest on a track with me n you deuce!

:)


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