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Daubs 12-15-05 03:13 PM

Umm, yeah new audio...FUCK SAMIR HARMIN
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3216666


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13th. 12-15-05 03:31 PM

Listening:

LMFAO at ya intro,thats ace......flow isnt there just needs work....lyrics were well funny but not vey good...emotion and presence were on point tho

just keep dropping audio Daubs mate you'll get MILES better!!!:D

Tha Q. 12-15-05 11:20 PM

hmmm...intro was interesting, but too long


ur presence on the mic needs to do a 180-turn and head in the right direction...ur flow is weak here...

pops on the mic


not feelin this


elevate


but...keep droppin so u can make the changes to elevate


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Daubs 12-16-05 06:50 PM

cheers mate^ .

B To The D 12-17-05 06:12 AM

rofl@mwhahaha and squeky voice

flows off most times,need to elevate that
deliverys ok
emotions not good needs upped
qualitys better than mine:(
lyrics are koo lmao@roundabout line
ROFL@Breaking a chair
Overall:6/10

Keep Elevating

Rtf Here Plz:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217290

Daubs 12-17-05 06:22 AM

safe, appreciate any pointers, il hit it up defo.

Kamze 12-21-05 10:40 AM

Love the intro that's dope.
Flow is kinda off at times.
The chair line was ood at the end.
But keep elevatin it's goin good.

Overall 7.5/10

Mad Dog 12-22-05 11:12 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Young Un...
rofl@mwhahaha and squeky voice


wow...theres a post if ever i saw one rofl

but ye you deffo need improvement...but it sounded a lil like my REAL EARLY unreleased unsaved ish lol

keep improving :thumbup:


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